Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein


After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."


The author's comments:
I feel like I have fallen in love with moonlit night. The inspiration is obvious from the poem's title. I've composed it to inspire other hearts which are unaware of night's beauty - the bewitching beauty of the moonlit night!

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on Jan. 10 2013 at 11:37 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

lovely feedback!

on Jan. 10 2013 at 11:31 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

I loved this poem so much. XD

on Jan. 10 2013 at 9:14 am
Steven_Hyde GOLD, Auburn, New York
17 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just Do It"
- Nike
"An eye for an eye only makes the world blind"
- Ghandi

This was one of the best poems I've ever read in my life, it was very well written you should be proud of your self!!!

on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:18 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

Thanks for the encouragement

on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:17 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

heart, it's only about nature and its beauty

on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:16 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks friend

on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:15 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks gg!

on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:14 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks!!!!

on Jan. 10 2013 at 8:13 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks! glad to get comment

on Jan. 10 2013 at 7:05 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them."

aww.....the poem is so enthralling!...just like d nightingale's soothing song...!...perfect choice of words...! :)

on Jan. 10 2013 at 1:21 am
VaughnsWorld BRONZE, Houston, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment
umm this my first time commenting ummm ummm how bout it needs help with the flow (crowed- boo boo) im sorry im sorry

on Jan. 10 2013 at 1:21 am
Kill-switch_996 BRONZE, Bangalore, Other
3 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Burdens never get lighter, the bearers get stronger"

great poem and nice reciprocation of thought into rhyme..very well done.. :)

on Jan. 10 2013 at 12:19 am
SiblingCoC BRONZE, Other City, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments
Wait so is this about someone getting married or the nature getting married?

on Jan. 9 2013 at 1:34 pm
theforgotenone GOLD, Willmington, Delaware
12 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is a book you dont want to fill it up to fast just make it last

its really good you should be proud

on Jan. 9 2013 at 11:37 am
TrekkieFangirlForLife SILVER, Oceanside, California
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
If your not pretty, your beautiful. if ur not beautiful, ur goregous, If ur not gorgeous, u have an unearthly beauty

love it...i really really do. now if only i can write about my love for it too.

on Jan. 8 2013 at 9:20 am
SugarcoatIt BRONZE, Delhi, Other
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments
This is one of those works which I felt like reading over again as soon as I finished it. Its beautiful how you explained your love for a moonlight night. Its simple yet has spark n connects...:) GR8 JOB!

lshem BRONZE said...
on Jan. 8 2013 at 12:41 am
lshem BRONZE, Burien, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"When life gives you a hundred reasons to cry, show life that you have a thousand reasons to smile.\"
- Unknown

Beautiful.......absolutely beautiful<3

on Jan. 7 2013 at 12:35 pm
Mr.Poetman PLATINUM, Union City, Indiana
28 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You miss 100 percent of the shots you never take.” -Wayne Gretzy

I like your use of words but once again i dont particularly like it, not enough rhymimg for me. I know not all poetry has to flow great but that what i look for, but other than that it was a great write, very decriptive.

on Jan. 7 2013 at 12:17 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

Wow.. I think that is your best. Absolutely beautiful

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 11:32 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
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Amazing. 5/5!! ^ ^




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