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After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."



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I_Play_In_TrafficThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 9:14 am
This was one of the best poems I've ever read in my life, it was very well written you should be proud of your self!!!
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 11:37 am
lovely feedback!
 
Kanupriya said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 7:05 am
aww.....the poem is so enthralling!...just like d nightingale's soothing song...!...perfect choice of words...! :)
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:13 am
thanks! glad to get comment
 
Anarchy996 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 1:21 am
great poem and nice reciprocation of thought into rhyme..very well done.. :)
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:16 am
thanks friend
 
DestroyedHeartThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 12:19 am
Wait so is this about someone getting married or the nature getting married?
 
WelcomeToVaughnsWorld replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 1:21 am
umm this my first time commenting ummm ummm how bout it needs help with the flow (crowed- boo boo) im sorry im sorry
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:17 am
heart, it's only about nature and its beauty
 
theforgotenoneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 9, 2013 at 1:34 pm
its really good you should be proud
 
Hipster_Lovelock_Princess said...
Jan. 9, 2013 at 11:37 am
love it...i really really do. now if only i can write about my love for it too.
 
SugarcoatIt said...
Jan. 8, 2013 at 9:20 am
This is one of those works which I felt like reading over again as soon as I finished it. Its beautiful how you explained your love for a moonlight night. Its simple yet has spark n connects...:) GR8 JOB!
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:18 am
Thanks for the encouragement
 
lshem said...
Jan. 8, 2013 at 12:41 am
Beautiful.......absolutely beautiful<3
 
Mr.Poetman said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 12:35 pm
I like your use of words but once again i dont particularly like it, not enough rhymimg for me. I know not all poetry has to flow great but that what i look for, but other than that it was a great write, very decriptive.
 
GGLovesAPartner said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 12:17 pm
Wow.. I think that is your best. Absolutely beautiful
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:15 am
thanks gg!
 
Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 11:32 am
Amazing. 5/5!! ^ ^
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 8:14 am
thanks!!!!
 
Paige H. said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 2:10 am
I love how descriptive it is. I find that a night with a full moon is quite pretty.
 
Hamzawaseem replied...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 3:05 am
thanks! I'd be glad if you could check my other poems  
 
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