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After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."



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TheMadHatterEmilyDickinsonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 31 at 3:31 pm
Haha, I love this one! It's very descriptive and aboslutely, just beautiful! I love to watch the moon, especially when it's full. The moon beams are beautiful to look at also. Thank you for sharing this! ^_^
 
VampQueen said...
May 15 at 1:24 pm
This is so beutiful love it really calming.
 
sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 9:07 pm
this is really sweet and magical!
 
MysticLady said...
May 25, 2013 at 3:01 pm
This is awesome! Nice, calming, and happy. Keep it up!
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 5:27 pm
Ahh. This is just a charming poem. Filled with lovely imagery.
 
KJ-love said...
Apr. 20, 2013 at 1:55 pm
Very good!
 
UsamaAhmed said...
Apr. 17, 2013 at 12:55 pm
Well Written... Beautifully expressed .. good job yaar.. i read it like 2 weeks ago forgot to post a comment
 
Sonza said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 2:25 pm
really nice!! :)
 
LivelyJade said...
Apr. 13, 2013 at 1:59 pm
I love the enchanting, majestic spin you put on the night! Amazing!
 
AbbaDabbaDoo said...
Apr. 12, 2013 at 7:33 am
Beautiful, inspiring, and enchanting! Keep writing like this. You'll go down in history!
 
LiraDaeris said...
Apr. 11, 2013 at 4:00 am
A very pretty poem :D The only critiques I would say is to smooth out the rhythm. Especially since this is a very serene topic and tone, a smooth rhythm will really give it that extra oomph :)
 
SickPuppy said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 9:55 am
Wow! I loved the way you brought out that night time innocence! 
 
Sunny225This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 7:38 am
this is my favorite one out of all of them :D
 
Hamzawaseem said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 7:36 am
Thank you everyone. loved you feedback!
 
Swa.Swara.Vismaya said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 6:11 am
Really beautiful!!! Love your choice of words!! :)  
 
romanticpoet said...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 3:46 am
wow! ! ! rare creativity
 
UsamaAhmed said...
Apr. 8, 2013 at 2:29 am
Great choice Of words , well thought and well explained . Amazing!
 
Sunny225LuvsWorld_HugsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 2:19 pm
i luv this one its one of the best :)  
 
sassygurlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 12:38 am
i love it!! it is achingly sweet...
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 3:04 pm
this is really good i like your word choice
 
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