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My Love is Backwards

July 18, 2012
By AngelC BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
AngelC BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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Why do I love
you have treated me wrong
I should only love the man above
Realizing it took me so long
But I can't help but to love you
Hoping you'd love me back
Sometimes I wonder if you love me to
My heart feels like a needle in a hay stack
Can I have just one more kiss
My mouth to your lips
As I make my last wish
feels like my heart is doing flips
walking away
hoping to try again another day.


The author's comments:
In this piece I kind of explained a love situation is a non order way. It basically explains how a Woman loves a guy but he has wronged her but she misses how things use to be.

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on Jul. 24 2012 at 8:57 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

i can totally relate and im sure every other girl can :) (maybe check out my work sometime)