May 22, 2012
By Caroline Reese BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
Caroline Reese BRONZE, Greenville, South Carolina
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I grasp the block I wait to hear the start
My heart is racing boom the gun is shoot
I dive and slowly rise the water parts
I pull I kick and show them what I got
I look in front oh no behind I fall
I need to move to keep a pace to win
The end is near its time to give my all
I push my self a faster pace I swim
I pass the first and second, third is next
Now even with the fourth ahead I am
I need to keep an edge to be the best
The wall, the flip, the test is here I can
I sprint to inch ahead I stretch I touch
I feel the wall I look I win my luck

The author's comments:
I love swimming, so I really wanted to write something about the way I feel about it.

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