You & Me

You asked.
I nodded with answer.
Wishing of words to say.
You walked away...
me ;no response.


You complemented.
I nodded with a smile.
Furiously agitated with my life.
You stared into my eyes...
me;no response.


You followed me home pouring questions.
I nodded in confusion.
Wanting to run away.
You looked down ...
me; no response.


You asked away.
I answered on a paper.
" Yes.(: "
You kissed my lips ...
Finally, something we both understand.





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Dreamer7697 said...
May 10, 2012 at 10:16 pm
I like it dreamer!;) Very ..hmm what's the word ..oh I know.. AMAZING!
 
unknown_dreamer replied...
May 11, 2012 at 6:14 am
ha, thanks so much !(:
 
Dreamer7697 said...
May 10, 2012 at 10:16 pm
I like it dreamer!;) Very ..hmm what's the word ..oh I know.. AMAZING!
 
AnnaX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2012 at 9:29 pm
Hi, I like this a lot! It is relatable. Great job.
 
DanielM said...
May 10, 2012 at 7:16 pm
Hey, that was awesome. I liked your Second Person Sentence Begining.. Great Job!! (:
 
unknown_dreamer replied...
May 10, 2012 at 7:42 pm
thanks so much !(:
 
maddyhatter said...
May 10, 2012 at 6:35 pm
wondering is this from personal experince are you unable to speek or is it a stroke of genius that hit your brain ether way makes for a great story keep writting 
 
unknown_dreamer replied...
May 10, 2012 at 6:53 pm

I actually just thought of it.(:

Just because someone can't speak, dosen't mean they can't be with someone that can(:

 
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