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ME!!!!

Go ahead judge me
In the end it wont matter
So just let me be
Or my heart you'll shatter
You'll always be wrong
Because MY mind is MY creation
My imagination goes long
My mind is its own nation
MY MIND IS MINE
So don't waist our time



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SecretFlameThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 10:01 pm:
This was a great way to put it in perspective! Great job and keep it up. It was short and blazing with fire :)
 
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KanupriyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 3:59 am:
MY MIND IS ITS OWN NATION-my favourite lines...short and simple yet thrilling...luv it :)
 
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AyeshaLiveLaughLove said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 12:12 am:
Wow! What a great way to put it! Nice work(:
 
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DanielM said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 1:50 am:
Wow this is a really good poem. Great job and great message. I really like this poem it shows how being you is the best. Suggestions: maybe extend more on this whole you and my part.
 
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moonshadow said...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 4:57 pm:
I would put a 5/5 star, but first I needed to know...why no punctuations? Otherwise, I like it.
 
somerandomperson replied...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 6:52 pm :
because i wrote it  as not yelling but as calmly explaining the ovious
 
somerandomperson replied...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 9:49 pm :
 i dont like puncuation unless i truly must
 
somerandomperson replied...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 9:49 pm :
 i dont like puncuation unless i truly must
 
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Kylah said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 10:23 pm:
I love how you used the word MY. It was really good!
 
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hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 3:11 pm:
I rated this poem 5/5 stars. I think this is a great image of not confoming to the world's mold. LOVED IT<3
 
somerandomperson replied...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 10:08 pm :
Thank you!
 
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