ME!!!!

April 15, 2012
By somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone


Go ahead judge me
In the end it wont matter
So just let me be
Or my heart you'll shatter
You'll always be wrong
Because MY mind is MY creation
My imagination goes long
My mind is its own nation
MY MIND IS MINE
So don't waist our time


The author's comments:
I thought of this after someone criticized me. I know sonnets usually have 10 syllables but o well. comment so i can improve!

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on Mar. 19 2013 at 10:01 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

This was a great way to put it in perspective! Great job and keep it up. It was short and blazing with fire :)

on Jul. 16 2012 at 3:59 am
Songs_Along GOLD, Abcd, Other
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes we are only given a few minutes to be with the one we love and a thousand hours to spend just thinking about them."

MY MIND IS ITS OWN NATION-my favourite lines...short and simple yet thrilling...luv it :)

on Jul. 11 2012 at 12:12 am
AyeshaLiveLaughLove BRONZE, Overland Park, Kansas
4 articles 1 photo 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today."
-James Dean

Wow! What a great way to put it! Nice work(:

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 1:50 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Wow this is a really good poem. Great job and great message. I really like this poem it shows how being you is the best. Suggestions: maybe extend more on this whole you and my part.

on Jun. 9 2012 at 9:49 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

 i dont like puncuation unless i truly must

on Jun. 9 2012 at 9:49 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

 i dont like puncuation unless i truly must

on Jun. 9 2012 at 6:52 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

because i wrote it  as not yelling but as calmly explaining the ovious

on Jun. 9 2012 at 4:57 pm
TheDarkSideOfTheMoon SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dark is a way and light is a place,
Heaven that never was
Nor will be ever is always true

-Dylan Thomas,
"Poem on His Birthday"

I would put a 5/5 star, but first I needed to know...why no punctuations? Otherwise, I like it.

Saphy BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:23 pm
Saphy BRONZE, Hollywood, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never forget to smile.

I love how you used the word MY. It was really good!

on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:08 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

Thank you!

on Apr. 19 2012 at 3:11 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I rated this poem 5/5 stars. I think this is a great image of not confoming to the world's mold. LOVED IT<3


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