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Is there a sweeter friend to man than Death?
For it is Death who, patient, holds the door.
He's at our bedside for our final breath
And visits every land on every shore.
A mother mourns the son that's left her reach,
But death enclosed both in his embrace.
He guards his Guests within his Gothic Keep,
And Saints are ever gladdened by his face.
But ah! These things are hellish but for Christ!
Without Death's King, his Keep? A Blackish Hole!
And every man'd be trapped in endless night
Without a Heaven to reclaim their souls.
He's but a friend who sweetly holds the door
That's gate to God, a Friend who's sweet still more.




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jmitchbbThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 6:43 pm:
I really like this poem, it reminds me of the narrator of The Book Theif, if you haven't read it, you definitly should!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 8:25 pm :
The comment about "Book Theif" being a nickname was a reply to you. Thank you fortaking the time to comment on my work!
 
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TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 5 at 11:29 pm:
Gee, thanks! I had to try and work hard to make Death come to life... (that oun was an accident.)
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 8:23 pm :
Lol, perhaps I will. It used to be my nickname in my fam (i still maintain my claim of innocence!!)
 
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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 2 at 3:08 am:
An exceptional sonnet! The theme is so well-portrayed. The last line is my favourite. 
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 6 at 12:10 am :
The "Gee, thanks ect reply was to you, Dua. I clicked on the wrong button.
 
SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 6 at 12:26 pm :
Well, seems all the hard work sure paid off! Cause this is AWESOME.
 
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AmayaEcho said...
Jan. 1 at 7:28 pm:
I really like this!  It's a balance between the goodness of Christ, who is, in a way, both life and death!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 26 at 2:49 pm :
I do not think of him as being death.... not quite. Death was... invented by men, almost. More of, he is the one who tamed death, who made death our ally. It is amazing to me... the author of life taking death and making death INTO life! I remeber waching Mel Gibson's Passion, and seeing that scene where Christ turns to his mother and hes all beaten and bloody and says "See, Mother? I make all things new."
 
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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 10:40 pm:
Wow. My eyes are opened now!! I honestly never though of death as being a prologue of relief to the journey we call life. This is a very intriguing perspective, and I look forward to reading more of your work!!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 26 at 2:43 pm :
Thank you. :)
 
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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 11:05 pm:
Amazing! I like the new way you portray death in this poem; most of us would not think death to be a good part of life. The style of writing is beautiful! 
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 7:13 pm :
Thanks, Rain, its a poem im proud of. Glad you liked it.
 
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GypsyrosesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 9, 2012 at 3:38 pm:
Beautiful. Amazingly sophisticated, and the rythm and rhyme is always perfect. I love the way its almost old fashioned, but still interesting and holds your attention.
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 9, 2012 at 5:48 pm :
Thank you, Gypsy. It's an English Sonnet, although it dosen't look that way with TI's new formatting. I wish more people would use that style, I like em and I haven't found many on this site. I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reading it.
 
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poet100 said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 5:06 pm:
Breathtaking; i completely agree with the previos review. The depthness of the poem is extraordinary, especially when dealing with such a simple topic.
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 4:06 pm :
Thankyou, Im glad you liked it.
 
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Behind_a_Plastic_SmileThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 6:24 pm:
wow this is a really beautiful peice. I love the twist on such an overly simplified subject. it makes it deeper and gives real meaning to ur words.
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 15, 2012 at 7:29 am :
Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 18, 2012 at 4:24 pm :

??? I have no idea why my post says that, I didn't type that.

 

What I said, basically, was thanks and that I was glad that you liked it.

 
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