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Nitty Gritty MAG

December 19, 2011
By missscribbles SILVER, Paris, Other
missscribbles SILVER, Paris, Other
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments

They twist my arms into comical shapes
At their pecks, my hopes go wormy and wet,
Their sad, bald heads pop like a fist of grapes.
Above my head, they cry a battle threat.
They caw to me that life is bittersweet
As they poke waxy beaks into my life
And dig their pigeon claws into red meat.
Their dulcet tones cut sharper than a knife.
They walk in my palate of reds and blues
And fit my aching back with wings of lead.
They've only given me the right to lose.
The Nitty Gritty hisses in my head.
It hooks its toothless gums around my ear
And teaches me to live my life in fear.



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on Jun. 24 2012 at 9:11 am
missscribbles SILVER, Paris, Other
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments
Thank you!

on Jun. 24 2012 at 12:33 am
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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Perfect! You are a very talented writer, and I really enjoyed reading your work!

on Jan. 10 2012 at 11:07 am
missscribbles SILVER, Paris, Other
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments
thank you!

on Jan. 9 2012 at 4:47 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

Wow, this is fantastic. It has excellent imagery and a perfectly hidden message. Congrats, this piece deserves it!

on Jan. 9 2012 at 3:38 pm
missscribbles SILVER, Paris, Other
6 articles 0 photos 25 comments
thank you! That's really nice to hear.

babysteps GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 5:50 pm
babysteps GOLD, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind."
~Mahatma Gandhi

Great job! I really enjoyed reading this!