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Response to Sonnet 130

December 7, 2011
By Unpredictable_Me SILVER, Warr Acres, Oklahoma
Unpredictable_Me SILVER, Warr Acres, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm the only fruitloop in a box of of cheerios."


You have treated me rather unkindly
You always showcased my unnatural flaws
You have dominated me unfairly
Your painful words were as sharp as the cat's claws
You chased away whats left of my self-esteem
With the brutal honesty you presented
My pride for myself will never be redeemed
Because of my appearance you resented
You've made of me a self-concious woman
Worrying about people's thoughts everyday
My trust for you eventually deadened
And for those reasons I can honestly say
There has never been someone i most feared
Than my forever beloved Shakespeare


The author's comments:
the title kinda explains itself but but this is a response sonnet to William Shakespeares sonnet 130

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BeastBoy1 said...
on Mar. 17 2014 at 2:37 am
I liked it but it should have kept a humorous beat like in sonnet 130