Wander

September 15, 2011
By AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER, Sidney, Nebraska
AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER, Sidney, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason.


She wanders through an empty field
A place where every dream is real
The sky is always bluer here
And thorn-less roses bloom all year
Where sorrows fade into the past
And joy and love are made to last
Tears have not fallen to its floor
No broken hearts come through its door
There are no lies behind a kiss;
“Goodbye” used only to dismiss
But in this place of love and hope,
Without the pain, there is no growth
And so she wanders endlessly,
A child, she’ll forever be.


The author's comments:
This piece started out as a simple description of a perfect place, an escape from the pain of real life. As I kept writing though, it turned into something different. Hope you like it!

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on Nov. 14 2011 at 5:34 pm
AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER, Sidney, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason.

Thank you so so much! So do you from what I've read of your works! Keep writing, you'll go far!

on Nov. 14 2011 at 5:33 pm
AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER, Sidney, Nebraska
8 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason.

Thank you! So do you from what I've read of your works! Keep writing, you'll go far!

on Nov. 13 2011 at 10:30 pm
Awesome!  You have a very individual artistic style that is very appealling.

on Nov. 13 2011 at 8:55 pm
AlwaysDanceInTheRain SILVER, Sidney, Nebraska
8 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason.

Thank you very much! :)

on Nov. 12 2011 at 8:33 pm
Dancing2222 GOLD, Sandy, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."
"Imagination is more important that knowledge" -Albert Einstein
"Don't ever frown, you never know who's going to fall in love with your smile."

Very nice!!! You were right about my poem (wouldn't it be nice) and yours being very similar! Nicely done:)

on Sep. 25 2011 at 3:05 pm
There is so much emotion in this peice! You can really feel what the writer was feeling!

on Sep. 24 2011 at 10:51 am
Man! This is fantastic! It's got such great flow and rhythm to it. Great job, keep writing!

skittles said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 10:37 am
Wow. This is so amazing! "Tears have not fallen to its floor, no broken hearts come through its door"... beautiful, absoulutely beautiful!

on Sep. 24 2011 at 10:30 am
Emmyluwho BRONZE, Mckinney, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read." - Groucho Marx

I love this poem and your idea that without pain, we can never learn or progress.


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