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Wander

She wanders through an empty field
A place where every dream is real
The sky is always bluer here
And thorn-less roses bloom all year
Where sorrows fade into the past
And joy and love are made to last
Tears have not fallen to its floor
No broken hearts come through its door
There are no lies behind a kiss;
“Goodbye” used only to dismiss
But in this place of love and hope,
Without the pain, there is no growth
And so she wanders endlessly,
A child, she’ll forever be.




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Gingersnap777 said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 10:30 pm:
Awesome!  You have a very individual artistic style that is very appealling.
 
AlwaysDanceInTheRain replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:33 pm :
Thank you! So do you from what I've read of your works! Keep writing, you'll go far!
 
AlwaysDanceInTheRain replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:34 pm :
Thank you so so much! So do you from what I've read of your works! Keep writing, you'll go far!
 
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AlwaysDanceInTheRain said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 8:55 pm:
Thank you very much! :)
 
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Dancing2222This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 8:33 pm:
Very nice!!! You were right about my poem (wouldn't it be nice) and yours being very similar! Nicely done:)
 
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Dancingallday said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 3:05 pm:
There is so much emotion in this peice! You can really feel what the writer was feeling!
 
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blueberrysunshine said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 10:51 am:
Man! This is fantastic! It's got such great flow and rhythm to it. Great job, keep writing!
 
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skittles said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 10:37 am:
Wow. This is so amazing! "Tears have not fallen to its floor, no broken hearts come through its door"... beautiful, absoulutely beautiful!
 
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Emmyluwho said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 10:30 am:
I love this poem and your idea that without pain, we can never learn or progress.
 
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