One Whisper

There is a sound in my ear.
That is close to my heart.
A sound no would recall.
It is a noise in the dark.

It is below normal range.
A secret for two.
No one would understand,
Because it is between me and you.

Facial expression become changed,
Eyes wonder back and forth.
Curiosity has swept the air,
For people know what hush tones are worth.

The tone is soft and gentle.
Starts slow and then quicker.
You now have my heart,
All because of one whisper.





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Chibi_Danni said...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 10:35 pm

Truely poetic!

Keep writing,

Danni

 
thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 11:51 pm
I love it! This might be my favorite poem of yours. It's written so beautifully! Great Job!
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 4:53 pm
i really like this, it almost feels like there is so muchmore beneatht the words and that the whole story isn't being told. It's mysterious, which i love!
 
AlaskaFrost This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 9:19 pm
This is such a cute poem! I like it :)
 
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 2:04 am
I like this poem. Sometimes, hush sounds are what speaks louder!
 
dark_armor1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 10:46 am
exacally ! :) thank you
 
Raytheraym said...
Aug. 19, 2011 at 8:55 pm
This is really good! :)
 
dark_armor1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 12:15 am
thank you ! :)
 
cowgirl4ever replied...
Sept. 28, 2011 at 5:46 pm
this is well written (:
 
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