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Missing Mommy

May 16, 2011
By Brittne BRONZE, Katy, Texas
Brittne BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Live for today and NOT tomorrow's satisfaction"
-Brittne


Missing her so much its driving me nuts
And sometimes I wish I could bring her back
Nursing me when I fell bandaging cuts,
And also timing me on the huge track
Well sometimes people wonder why I cry



But when I stand and politely say
Then they start to understand why I try
Heads grants the present gift to turn my way
She instilled in me the value of trust
By making sure that I never gave up
Sunday nights I felt I was going to bust
And she made me shine when she brought my pup
I miss and love her unconditionally
She taught me to love life beautifully!


The author's comments:
I was inspired by my mom's death to write this sonnet. Not having her leaves a huge hole in my heart, but I learn to take it a day at a time.

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on Jun. 16 2011 at 5:00 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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Sounds like you worked really hard on the rhyming. The topic and the emotion was lovely, I just wish that I could have flowed better.