Beneath the Surface

April 17, 2011
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Darkness Darkness all around
I'm trapped here and am alone.
I hear not a sound
All I know is the hard cold stone.
I'm lost to the world above
Of the living and the dead
Forgotten by those I love,
Not a tear for me was shed.
And even though I feel no pain,
In this cold unmoving world
I miss the sun; I miss the rain
And the clouds that swirled.
I miss the world I once knew,
But what I miss most is you.

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Debbie1 said...
May 23, 2011 at 5:36 pm
This was amazing! great job! Please check out some of my wrk when you have the time :-)
Dreamer21 replied...
Mar. 9, 2013 at 2:32 pm
Thank you so much for the comment and I would love to read your work. I'll check it out :D
MaryGabrielle said...
May 21, 2011 at 12:31 pm
wow! this is really great! I am just starting out here and I would love if you could check out my poem Green-eyed Monster. keep writing!
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