Beneath the Surface

April 17, 2011
By Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
29 articles 12 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world you might be one person, but to one person you might be the world.


Darkness Darkness all around
I'm trapped here and am alone.
I hear not a sound
All I know is the hard cold stone.
I'm lost to the world above
Of the living and the dead
Forgotten by those I love,
Not a tear for me was shed.
And even though I feel no pain,
In this cold unmoving world
I miss the sun; I miss the rain
And the clouds that swirled.
I miss the world I once knew,
But what I miss most is you.

The author's comments:
THIS IS MY SONNET!!!!
we had to write one of our fears
mine includes dying alone, being buried alive, and dying unloved and hated
those were the three I chose but i could have done something else with my other fears

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on Mar. 9 2013 at 2:32 pm
Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
29 articles 12 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world you might be one person, but to one person you might be the world.

Thank you so much for the comment and I would love to read your work. I'll check it out :D

Debbie1 SILVER said...
on May. 23 2011 at 5:36 pm
Debbie1 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is life, there is hope."

This was amazing! great job! Please check out some of my wrk when you have the time :-)

on May. 21 2011 at 12:31 pm
MaryGabrielle BRONZE, Leonardo, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments
wow! this is really great! I am just starting out here and I would love if you could check out my poem Green-eyed Monster. keep writing!


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