Love's Eternal Breath

March 30, 2011
By WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain


Why did God suddenly take you away?
I shall forever now ask myself why.
I have to live forever without your wonder and grace,
Now since I lost you one heartbreaking night.



The soft moonlight is now our love's fire,
As I visit you in your silent sleep.
The need to feel your touch is never more dire.
My tragic, frozen tears fall as I weep.



Your soft crimson lips are now decaying,
And I cannot reach you deep down below.
Time's defiance to your beauty is betraying,
Just in memories does your true beauty still show.



But I shall always be with you my love,
One short, half-cut lifetime wasn't enough.


The author's comments:
This was a sonnet that we had to write for my honors english class.

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on Apr. 30 2011 at 6:40 pm
WynterPage95 ELITE, Monticello, Arkansas
164 articles 8 photos 76 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to burn out than to fade away..." -Kurt Cobain

sure i wuld love to read ur story, and thanks for the feedback

mlynch BRONZE said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 8:13 am
mlynch BRONZE, Summit, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That's why they call it present."

I loved this poem!!! It was sooo sweet!! Good job writing this poem and 5 stars!! If you have time, could you please check out my story "Just Like My Mother"? Please comment and rate it cause I need all the feedback I can get. Thanks and great job!!!




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