Love's Eternal Breath

March 30, 2011
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Why did God suddenly take you away?
I shall forever now ask myself why.
I have to live forever without your wonder and grace,
Now since I lost you one heartbreaking night.

The soft moonlight is now our love's fire,
As I visit you in your silent sleep.
The need to feel your touch is never more dire.
My tragic, frozen tears fall as I weep.

Your soft crimson lips are now decaying,
And I cannot reach you deep down below.
Time's defiance to your beauty is betraying,
Just in memories does your true beauty still show.

But I shall always be with you my love,
One short, half-cut lifetime wasn't enough.

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livlaughluv98 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 8:13 am
I loved this poem!!! It was sooo sweet!! Good job writing this poem and 5 stars!! If you have time, could you please check out my story "Just Like My Mother"? Please comment and rate it cause I need all the feedback I can get. Thanks and great job!!!
GothChik95 replied...
Apr. 30, 2011 at 6:40 pm
sure i wuld love to read ur story, and thanks for the feedback
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