Your Mistake

March 12, 2011
By Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."


A Splash of sand,
Is that where it started?
Waves crashed on land
Was that where we parted?
So much time has passed,
And yet it feels like yesterday,
Since last my heart was smashed
Back in the spring warmth of May.
Did I not warn you time and again?
How that bum could get ya hurt?
Older then you by the year of 10,
But you fell for the muscles under his shirt.
I thought we’d have a house built for two.
But I’ve moved on, as should you.


The author's comments:
For the girl who left me last year for some skater gangster wantabe. But i found someone ten times better.

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on Apr. 10 2011 at 10:01 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

This is expressed so well. It flows and makes you want to keep reading. It ends with a good strong ending! Bravo, i am enjoying all of your work IMMENSELY


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