Unforgettable

March 11, 2011
By NoxInviticus SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
NoxInviticus SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"I never paint dreams. I paint my own reality." Frida Kahlo


Ardent love is such a sinful creature.
What, with its insatiable desire.
Glamorized as a beautiful feature,
Its consequences can be quite dire.

Even now, I'm wanting still more of you,
Needing to quench this fire in my chest.
My body yearning for you to subdue,
Every inch of me; never any less.

Now let us escape, together, tonight,
And let us forget that mornings exist.
Come, make bloom in me your flowers of light,
And of this love let us nothing resist.

You're unforgettable, the way you love.
Unforgettable, taking me above.



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on Apr. 5 2011 at 7:06 pm
NoxInviticus SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"I never paint dreams. I paint my own reality." Frida Kahlo

Thank you very much. I appreciate the feedback. :D

on Apr. 4 2011 at 12:20 am
lunaticonthegrass PLATINUM, Hobbs, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things which they themselves do not understand."-Plato
"Envy is ignorance"-Ralph Waldo Emerson
"Choose the day, the sign of the day, the day's divinity."-Jim Morrison

I really Love the line, "And let us forget that mornings exist". I have always found the sonnet to be easy to do wrong, but magic when done right, and this one is very mystical. Good stuff.




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