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November 13, 2010
By KellyJeanH PLATINUM, North Canton, Ohio
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\"You think I\'m bipolar, sadistic, sarcastic, and psychotic. Unfortunately for you, everyone else thinks I\'m perfect.\"

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Your disapproving look,
It haunts me.
That's all it toke,
To make me see.

Everything I do,
You always detect a flaw.
I loved you,
But, now, I feel nothing at all.

You've become too much to bare,
I begin breaking.
Do you even care?
Do you see anything in me worth saving?

So, break me down bit by bit.
We both know I'll never make it.

© Cerys W., Marblehead, MA

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