Take me to this place

November 21, 2010
By caitlinn BRONZE, Avon Lake, Ohio
caitlinn BRONZE, Avon Lake, Ohio
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I stand on the edge ready to jump in
Feel the goose bumps tingling in my spine
Breathe in that air that can make my head spin
I take the final breath that takes my mind

Off I go into the shallow water
Of my mind, it takes me someplace I fear
But fear only pushes to go farther
And there is nothing else left that I hear

Nothing else but this can take me away
Nothing takes me to this integral state
I try to find something, but all is gray
Throughout the days, I find unneeded weight

And then I drink in that sweet air again
Taking me somewhere I have always been


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on Dec. 12 2010 at 8:08 pm
caitlinn BRONZE, Avon Lake, Ohio
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Thank you so much:)

I will!


on Dec. 10 2010 at 9:29 am
Swindlewick SILVER, ..., Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." ~Voltaire

Whoa, I like this! Good image. Keep writing!


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