September 25, 2010
You take away my breath
It catches in my throat
My head’s up in the clouds
I feel like I can float
An unexpected kiss
Or a simple, knowing grin
Is enough for me to melt
And make butterflies begin
Your shining, happy face
With eyes alight with care
A dimple in your cheek
And gorgeous windswept hair
But I think your soul
Who you are in whole
Is honest and true what makes you, you
And makes you beautiful

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 7:46 pm
I like this poem very much. The intimacy between the couple is touching, and the words are rhythmically and beautifull put together. I enjoyed reading this...
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