Love we hate

July 31, 2010
By naliba BRONZE, St-luc, Other
naliba BRONZE, St-luc, Other
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For who is he, the image of perfection.
The beauty that resurrects the dead?
My heart has set and lost sense of direction.
Help me find it, love, at full speen ahead.

I need you-you need me- For eternity
We shall live, and forever shall we fight,
Fight for peace, each other, and dignity.
Nervertheless will i die for you, my light.

but who dare he make me his lover ,
While he serves a sentence behind bars!
Our infant son he did smother,
Leavin my heart with unhealable scars.

Never will I look at him in the eyes
And see what I once loved. At noon he dies.

The author's comments:
This was just something I came up with for a class project, and I was trying to represent the love we hate but in a more dark and extravagant way.

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on Apr. 5 2011 at 8:24 pm
jenniraffe BRONZE, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind--Dr. Suess

this is great. i loved it. i would say check out my work, but your comment on mine is the reason i looked at this.

im glad i did though :)


naliba BRONZE said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:49 pm
naliba BRONZE, St-luc, Other
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Thank you very much, i will definitly ;)

on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:36 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

ahhh! wow :) true beauty and honesty in everything you just wrote. the rhythm is great, and everything you wrote about really comes across great to the reader :) i love it!! 5 stars :) would you mind checking out some of my newer work please? thanks, and keep writing!!!! :)




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