A Paradise In Hell

July 8, 2010
By PoemLoverSara PLATINUM, Tampa, Florida
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Love Is Nothing But A Dream♥


All i want is peace,
All i want is love,
I dont want to be torn into pieces,
I want angels from above.

I dont want anymore fighting,
I want happines,
I just want things to be exciting,
I want to see the end of sadness.

I need peace to come to the world,
I want someone to make a change,
I just need a girl,
That has love to exchange.

People just dont realize,
That in the middle of this,
People idealize,
Just to piss.

Other people really care,
Some dont understand,
They would dare,
To hurt and not take a stand.

We need to cry,
All we need in the bottom of the well,
For no one to die,
We just need a paradise in hell.


The author's comments:
this is to save the world from all the crap thats been going on lately..

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on Aug. 11 2010 at 2:09 pm
PoemLoverSara PLATINUM, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Love Is Nothing But A Dream♥

thank you :) yeah i wish the whole world was like this.

on Aug. 9 2010 at 1:51 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I loved reading this; it seemed very heartfelt. Your wants are noble ones, and if the whole world felt the same way then it would be a much better place. This is a great poem, with good rhythm!


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