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Movie

Lets rewind this part of my life
Rewind it like its a movie .
Lets go back to when we first started talking &| how you first knew me .
Press the play button , & lets see how it all started
Lets watch all the smiles we shared before we departed .
Just pause it for a minute . . I loved you I just want you to know
By the way we spoke to each other , something began to grow .
But then someone hit the stop button & everything came to an end
I lost my lover , my heart , one of my best friends .
You meant something in life , we had a love story , we made a movie
But I will care for you always , love yours truely ?



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 7:52 pm

I really like this and I've definitely had these thoughts before... very good poem :)

Check out my stuff sometime?

 
Kaitt This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2010 at 7:25 pm
i love how this is relatable to a lot of people, definately myself. the movie analogy was very creative and your writing style is great (: 
 
j-rye This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 1:05 am

i do appreciate your writing style but just a thought, you may want to try poems without rhyming... i think that you are talented enough to still achieve a flow even without it.

nonetheless though, i love your poems and i'm happy i stumbled upon them :)

 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:09 pm
Thank you =]
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:07 pm
Beautiful! :)
 
Jellybean9898 said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 7:53 pm
i liked how you used a movie as kind of your analogy for the poem.  really great job.  
 
Chanilla said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:33 pm
I love it. It hits a moment in my life when I went through the same thign with someone and if only it was a movie.
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 11:43 am
thank you :)
 
waywithwords said...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 9:18 pm
amazing! it's so heartfelt! keep it up!
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 8:57 pm
thank youu :] ♥ I will
 
_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 8:57 am

beautiful, with emotion people can relate to. (suggestion: you might want to check out The first time by Family force 5. You might like it.)

btw-can you check ot some of my stuff?

 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 8:56 pm
thank youu :] ♥ & yes I'll check your work now .
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 10:12 pm
Oh my goodness, this is amazing the creativity and emotion and flow...so perfect! This is def my favorite of yours!
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 8:55 pm
thank youu :] ♥
 
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