Movie

July 5, 2010
By ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥


Lets rewind this part of my life
Rewind it like its a movie .
Lets go back to when we first started talking &| how you first knew me .
Press the play button , & lets see how it all started
Lets watch all the smiles we shared before we departed .
Just pause it for a minute . . I loved you I just want you to know
By the way we spoke to each other , something began to grow .
But then someone hit the stop button & everything came to an end
I lost my lover , my heart , one of my best friends .
You meant something in life , we had a love story , we made a movie
But I will care for you always , love yours truely ?



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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 7:52 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I really like this and I've definitely had these thoughts before... very good poem :)

Check out my stuff sometime?


Kaitt PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 7:25 pm
Kaitt PLATINUM, Petersburg, Virginia
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i love how this is relatable to a lot of people, definately myself. the movie analogy was very creative and your writing style is great (: 

j-rye SILVER said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 1:05 am
j-rye SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace - Jimi Hendrix

i do appreciate your writing style but just a thought, you may want to try poems without rhyming... i think that you are talented enough to still achieve a flow even without it.

nonetheless though, i love your poems and i'm happy i stumbled upon them :)


on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:09 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

Thank you =]

on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:07 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Beautiful! :)

on Aug. 17 2010 at 7:53 pm
Jellybean9898 PLATINUM, Glendale, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When nothing goes right, go left"-Anonymous
"Thank God men cannot fly, and lay waste to the sky as well as the Earth"-Henry David Thoreau

i liked how you used a movie as kind of your analogy for the poem.  really great job.  

on Jul. 31 2010 at 11:43 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

thank you :)

on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:33 pm
Chanilla SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Die the way you lived, that's the way to go out. Don't drag it out, living like that doesn't mean a thing." - Public Enemies.

I love it. It hits a moment in my life when I went through the same thign with someone and if only it was a movie.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:57 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

thank youu :] ♥ I will

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:56 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

thank youu :] ♥ & yes I'll check your work now .

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:55 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

thank youu :] ♥

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:18 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
~~Isn't it funny how the most important things in life aren't things?~~

amazing! it's so heartfelt! keep it up!

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:57 am
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

beautiful, with emotion people can relate to. (suggestion: you might want to check out The first time by Family force 5. You might like it.)

btw-can you check ot some of my stuff?


on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:12 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh my goodness, this is amazing the creativity and emotion and flow...so perfect! This is def my favorite of yours!




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