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Go to God

She never believed in herself
She felt as if everything she did was wrong .
It was like her against the world
Nothing was able to keep her strong .
You never seen her put on a smile
You never seen her having a good time .
"Oh sweetie your so beautiful"
Deep down inside she knew it was a lie .
I tried to help her out . .
I used my power to help her out in every way
I told her that ..
"When your struggling and life knocks down on your knees , your in the perfect position to pray"
I told her that God is the one to go to
When everything else goes wrong .
He'll hold your hand the struggles
And help you to move on.



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Lucky7337 said...
Oct. 8, 2010 at 5:48 pm:
There is only one way to put this... amazing.
 
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Poetry4Ever said...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 8:43 pm:
OMG!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! It made me cry a little. But that was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! :)
 
Poetry4Ever replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 8:45 pm :
And if you could, I have some new poetry comming, Can you please check it out?? Thanks :)
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 9:17 pm :
Thank you :] <3 & sure ill check it out now !! =]
 
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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:08 pm:

So true, and inspirational. 

I loved the line..."When you're struggling and life knocks you down on your knees, you're in the perfect position to pray" Nicee.!

 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:11 pm :
Thank youu =]
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:21 pm :
No problem!:)
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 4:25 pm :
Oh can you please check out my poem "Is there a purpose?" ... if you dont mind
 
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Jellybean9898 said...
Aug. 17, 2010 at 7:52 pm:
so touching and so true.  cute, and inspiring.  i LIKED it. :) check out my work?
 
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just.me_899 said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 10:45 pm:
aawww, that really made me smile :))
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 11:59 am :
awh , thank youu :] ♥
 
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waywithwords said...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 9:20 pm:
very good! the message is 100% true!
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:03 pm :
thank youu :] ♥
 
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Danica said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 11:44 am:
I actually think this flows well, and I agree, the message is great.  It's very relatable.  Great job!  Please check out and comment on my stuff if you have the chance!
 
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V-ballChick said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 11:02 am:
Good job but it seems like it doesnt flow all that well but it has a really good meaning
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:03 pm :
thank youu :] ♥
 
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alwaysthinking said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 4:39 pm:
 this is really a good job. :)
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 12:00 pm :
♥ thanks
 
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