Alone

April 22, 2010
By SeptJess16 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
SeptJess16 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where classification is key, I want to erase the shred lines so I can be ME." - Stacey-Ann Chin


Just like him to wander off in silence
Little me slowly searching for his hand
To réalize his love was false and dense
My little tears soaked up in Coney's sand

Any sign of the ones you used to love
I was too young to understand your ways
To grasp that you would not search Him above
Modestly would be the end of your days

My father's day cards are collecting dust
And I'm searching for no one to call Dad
Trying to forget that day in August
And to remember the good we once had

My dim eyes close and I seem to be pleased,
But on the inside, my heart is diseased.


The author's comments:
This poem is about my father.

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crushd SILVER said...
on Jan. 9 2011 at 4:58 pm
crushd SILVER, Mobile, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Every wound can be forgotten in the right light.

its me!!!!!!!!! 

on May. 17 2010 at 8:47 pm
SeptJess16 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where classification is key, I want to erase the shred lines so I can be ME." - Stacey-Ann Chin

No problem <3 thanks for the comment. It always put a smile on my face when people actually comment on my work.

on May. 17 2010 at 10:14 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

whoa. this is way good! really deep, sad, and emotional. but i love it :) amazing job!! 5 stars :) would you mind commenting on some of my work?

on May. 14 2010 at 12:28 pm
SeptJess16 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where classification is key, I want to erase the shred lines so I can be ME." - Stacey-Ann Chin

Thank you. <3

 


on May. 13 2010 at 9:56 pm
pfvDAN69 SILVER, Liverpool, New York
8 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"One day, I'm just gonna get off the bus and I'm gonna run into the woods and I'm never gonna come back. And when I come back, I'm gonna be the knight's master"

wow this is really good


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