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Alone

Just like him to wander off in silence
Little me slowly searching for his hand
To réalize his love was false and dense
My little tears soaked up in Coney's sand

Any sign of the ones you used to love
I was too young to understand your ways
To grasp that you would not search Him above
Modestly would be the end of your days

My father's day cards are collecting dust
And I'm searching for no one to call Dad
Trying to forget that day in August
And to remember the good we once had

My dim eyes close and I seem to be pleased,
But on the inside, my heart is diseased.



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crushdThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 9, 2011 at 4:58 pm:
its me!!!!!!!!! 
 
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Jesicamethyst said...
May 17, 2010 at 8:47 pm:
No problem <3 thanks for the comment. It always put a smile on my face when people actually comment on my work.
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 17, 2010 at 10:14 am:
whoa. this is way good! really deep, sad, and emotional. but i love it :) amazing job!! 5 stars :) would you mind commenting on some of my work?
 
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pfvDAN69 said...
May 13, 2010 at 9:56 pm:
wow this is really good
 
Jesicamethyst replied...
May 14, 2010 at 12:28 pm :

Thank you. <3

 

 
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