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Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
No, that would be stupid.
Firstly, the days of summer are often lame,
And I'm biased, thanks to Cupid.
It's not that you're lovely or temperate, though;
No, you possess something far better
Something that makes me feel like cookie dough
So what if you can't write but a letter?
It matters not, since I'm good at spelling
And I must say there is no telling
What makes you so surpass that summer's day
Though I do find out. When the sun's ray
Passes through my window in the early morn
My love for you is yet reborn.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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KCayla said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 10:37 am:
hahahaha i like the cookie dough part... I LVE COOKIE DOUGH BECAUSE IM THE COOKIE MONSTER!!!!!! OM NOM NOM!
 
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FallonC. said...
May 15, 2011 at 2:55 pm:
I barely could keep my eyelids up last night to make sense of Shakespeare's Sonnet 18. I loved reading with your parody.
 
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M_IML This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 9:53 pm:
Normally I would hate you for making fun of Shakespeare, but this is addmiteddly just about as witty as a parody can get :-)) Love it!
 
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magic-esi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 9:56 am:
Look, kid, I know you think it's just hilarious to give me a 1-star, then 2-star, then 3-star rating all in a row, but it's a childish prank. Stop doing this to all my articles, whoever you are. Teen Ink sends me emails and I know when you do it.
 
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HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 4:53 pm:
really like it.  and cookie dough is always even better than a summer day.
 
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forgottenpenname This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 2:29 pm:
CONGRATULATIONS ON MAKING THE MAGAZINE ESI!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!!!!!!!!! =D
 
magic-esi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 4:58 pm :

Thanks! I'm so excited!

I never got to congratulate you on your poem... It was really good.

 

I hope my family doesn't tell everyone they meet about this poem, too. But whatever! It's awesome that I'm going to be published!

 
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magic-esi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 5:30 pm:
Anyway, I wanted to say that this poem is totally a parody. This isn't about anyone I know. I actually had to read a romance book to figure out what I should write in this poem! The whole purpose of this poem is to make fun of Shakespeare. Just in case you misunderstood me!
 
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CreativeScript said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 12:29 am:

This is great! I love it! Really, the beginning is 5STARS!

Please look at my stuff, Comment, Rate! Ill look at more of your stuff.

 
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