Past Love

March 7, 2010
By eddie_is_amazing BRONZE, Cranford, New Jersey
eddie_is_amazing BRONZE, Cranford, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Power to the People"- John Lennon


My love for you burns like the shining sun
I want you more than anyone could want
My dear your beauty glimmers like my gun
You show no mercy on me while you haunt

My mind is cluttered with you everyday
And I can’t pull myself to look away
I watch you walk past me from day to day
So now I know what I must do today

But my past love keeps you away from me
Because she holds my heart still to this day
Her love holds me down like roots hold a tree
I can’t break free enough to be okay

So now I must open my mind and think
Of what to do in this confusing fink


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on Apr. 30 2010 at 6:00 am
eddie_is_amazing BRONZE, Cranford, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Power to the People"- John Lennon

thank you so much ! :)

on Apr. 24 2010 at 9:35 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

I love this! I can totally relate to it. Keep Writing!




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