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Filled with turmoil and a hurting fear
Winding down a path of life death and pain
Screaming out words people don't want to hear
Now hiding from them in the pouring rain

Wishing all those thoughts would just leave her head
She is running now and trying to hide
Often wishing she could just leave and be dead
She wishes for times when they had not lied

Scared of what will be in her tomorrows
Keeping her secret burning in her chest
Always filled with unspeakable sorrows
Wishing she could lie down and rest

She is stuck with an unbearable choice
Will anyone somehow hear her small voice

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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ShawnaJThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 2:12 pm:
I can relate. Very much. This shows so MUCH that people should notice more often.
 
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KatsKThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2012 at 12:16 pm:
Wow, this is really powerful.
 
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ClarinetPowerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 25, 2012 at 12:25 pm:
I hope I would hear her voice.
 
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reman5This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 3:43 am:
very nice poem! it profoundly expressed the distress that person is in and the choice they have to make to somehow make a difference because they simply can't take it anymore.
 
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be_unique. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 7, 2012 at 9:22 pm:
this is incredible! i can never write restricted poetry and sometimes it sounds un-natrual but this was so good and everything flowed!
 
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countrygirl28This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 8:04 pm:
Beautiful!! I love how you didn't hide any emotions from this piece, it was very real.
 
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LaShay_25 said...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 9:09 am:
i luv ur poem it's so true and has deep feeling and i felt like that a lot so i luv ur work
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 10:05 am:
awesome!! you pose a lot of questions and a lot of hard, real-life feelings in here. it's deep :) a little sad, yet affective. great job here!! would you mind checking out some of my work?
 
kysh15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 8:28 pm :
thanks so much, and I checked out your work and it is amazing!!! you are so talented! check out my other stuff?
 
FlawlessLawless replied...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 9:33 am :
oh!! I LOVED this!!!! your VERY talented!!! will you check some of my work out as well??
 
kysh15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 14, 2011 at 11:26 pm :
thanks! you are so talented too!!!
 
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