BFF Breakup

February 20, 2010
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Can you even move?
Are you even alive?
Or is this gratitude
Something you have been deprived?

Cause you seem isolated.
Are you seem sleeping here?
A dead man walking.
Your cover is but sheer, because I

Penetrate it. I am the exception, you're
Speechless. Just tell me how you feel.
Unbelievable. Is what this is.
It's Perfection. Yes it is a big deal.

Just speak to me.
I know that you are frozen.
Evil creatures they are.
That we women call men.

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dreamer_believer said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 10:22 am
ah-mazing!! took my breath away :) everything you wrote is sooo true. and very personal and deep. it's great! bravo :) 5 stars. id really like your opinon on my piece "take my heart and break it" would you mind commenting? :) KEEP WRITING!! :)
Milo! said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:08 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
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