BFF Breakup

February 20, 2010
By xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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Can you even move?
Are you even alive?
Or is this gratitude
Something you have been deprived?

Cause you seem isolated.
Are you seem sleeping here?
A dead man walking.
Your cover is but sheer, because I

Penetrate it. I am the exception, you're
Speechless. Just tell me how you feel.
Unbelievable. Is what this is.
It's Perfection. Yes it is a big deal.

Just speak to me.
I know that you are frozen.
Evil creatures they are.
That we women call men.


The author's comments:
I know that this poem is sexist near the end, and I usually don't say things like that, but i wrote it to make my best friend feel better...so I'm sorry if it offends you.

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on Apr. 29 2010 at 10:22 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

ah-mazing!! took my breath away :) everything you wrote is sooo true. and very personal and deep. it's great! bravo :) 5 stars. id really like your opinon on my piece "take my heart and break it" would you mind commenting? :) KEEP WRITING!! :)

Milo! said...
on Mar. 14 2010 at 11:08 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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