Not today

January 26, 2010
By NattyWrites SILVER, Monmouth County, New Jersey
NattyWrites SILVER, Monmouth County, New Jersey
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Swim far out but don’t drift away.
Hold my finger but don’t lead the way.
Kick the road but don’t fully release.
Cherish my laughter but only a piece.
Sit by me but don’t get too close.
Take my least and make it the most.
Be big in presence but don’t look my way.
I know that I’ll love you.. just not today.


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on Feb. 14 2010 at 11:29 am
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

This is short and sweet. I hope you keep writing things like this. You are a wonderful writer.

on Feb. 13 2010 at 11:48 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this blew me away!!! whoa. i'm almost speechless after reading this :) it's amazing. so simple, yet with great, deep meaning :) i love the line "take my least and make it most." all around a beautiful piece :) 5 stars!!!! check out some of my work and comment if you could, i love the feedback :) again, kudos on this piece :)


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