Breathing

January 22, 2010
By Tru4ever BRONZE, Odenville, Alabama
Tru4ever BRONZE, Odenville, Alabama
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When you breath
Do you think?
That is, about how
It's a gift, a luxury

Not a guarantee
Is this life
Unpredictable
Like a boat in a storm at sea

It confuses me
To not know
Whether to love or cry
to leave or breath

So confusing is this thing called life
For now I'll focus on the simplicity of breathing


The author's comments:
This is about how it all comes down to the little things in life. We worry about so much stuff and in the process just get confused

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on Feb. 1 2010 at 2:41 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet my familyXx


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