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Anger rises like bile in my throat
It’s burning through my veins, squeezing my heart
A smile plays on your lips as you gloat
I must stop before I rip you apart

Sweet ecstasy of the rage controls me
It seeps in my mind, I tear through my skin
Smile gone, you see me, your worst enemy
Do not bother running, you will not win

The forbidden taste of fury so sweet
Again I warn you don’t bother running
You my prey are in for a special treat
You are fast but I am still more cunning

You’re no match for my monstrous bulk
Hear me roar, I’m the Incredible Hulk




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MARGOGUTHRIE said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 6:58 am:
Don't have a lot of cash to buy a house? Worry no more, because that's possible to get the mortgage loans to work out such problems. Thence take a small business loan to buy all you require.
 
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EnigmaticBeing said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 1:08 am:
I love the word usage here. The message is clear, concise, and given with originality. I couldn't have enjoyed this piece more.
 
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winning MaSHEEN said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:05 pm:
i enjoyed it
 
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AlisRed said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 11:49 am:

I loved this poem, very strong emotion. I could feel my self being pulled in to it more and more as I read.

 

 
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clairebear<3 said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 7:56 pm:
LOVE IT. <3
 
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InfinityAndBeyond! said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:17 pm:
"Hear me roar, I'm the incredible Hulk" Intense I felt like I was the hulk. I can feel myself turning green and my pants magically turning purple. Big bulging biceps! Watch out evil viewers. Good job girl!
 
StormyxD replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:38 pm :
Thanks best friend. :D Try to keep the hulk explosions to a miniumum, wouldn't want your mother to throw a hissy when you brake the house.
 
InfinityAndBeyond! replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:47 pm :
too late! :D
 
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FisherUnderwood12 said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 12:50 pm:
It's not Carrie Underwood but I still love it. :)
 
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BananaRamaaa said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 7:47 pm:
cool title :) i like
 
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Jenna489 said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 2:58 pm:
LOVE THE POEM.
 
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iluvpadfoot said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 6:53 am:
I really like this article. Great flow! Plus, the hulk is my favorite super hero so you obviously have excellent taste! lol.
 
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musicalgal21 said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 7:59 pm:
Intense! Lot's of description, but I felt like the second to last paragraph was sort of repetitive. other than that, awesome. keep writing.
 
InfinityAndBeyond! replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:34 pm :
Thank you for telling me that! I got so frustrating writing that last stanza (is that what it's called?) because I wanted to end it with the second one.
 
StormyxD replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:37 pm :
that was from me btw, i forgot we were still logged into Rockie's account.
 
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carmel12 said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 12:52 pm:
Spectacular, enough said. (:(:
 
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somesortacrazy said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 12:49 pm:
haha! I love this, it made my day. You're really creative.
 
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Scillyx3 said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 12:45 pm:
great peice you really captured anger, the way it feels when your so mad, it's like you could just lose control even if it's just talking back to your parents or something. loved it <3
 
StormyxD replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 6:04 am :
I'm so happy you like it! thank you:D
 
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TreeHUGGERxD said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 12:39 pm:
Genius, really original for a shakepeare sonnet. everyone in my class did the whole forbidden love thing and it was completely repetitive. But I love this poem, forbidden love with a twist.
 
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