Betrayed

January 10, 2010
By daking666 SILVER, Union City, New Jersey
daking666 SILVER, Union City, New Jersey
8 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
its not the years in your life, but the life in your years because life is like a coin you can spend it any way u want, but you can only spend it once.


This feeling of betrayal and loneliness
Now the people I trusted are no more
Just leaving me there feeling hopeless
Destroyed me and just walked out the door

Pinned to the wall sword through the heart
Forced to watch everyone as they walk by
Some see me and just aim and through the dart
No one helps me live, only help me dye

I’ll fine one to put a smile on my face
To open the door and take out the sword
Someone who can help me find my own place
Tied together by invisible cord

Forever to live under the same sky
Never to lose you, even when I dye


The author's comments:
This was a piece I wrote one day when I was feeling really down and felt like I had no one there to help me when there were so many people around me. Now a days a lot of people feel this way a lot of the time especially teens. I hope that when people read this they realize that there is always some one there for them who loves them and will help you with what ever it is that they might need. Also might inspire other people to look for some one in need of a friend and help them in any way they can.

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on Jan. 25 2010 at 8:18 pm
daking666 SILVER, Union City, New Jersey
8 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
its not the years in your life, but the life in your years because life is like a coin you can spend it any way u want, but you can only spend it once.

lol damn for real lol well i saw a lot of plz lol :) n thax :D

SabriHun said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 8:13 pm
aww love the poem...get it fernando u got sum skillz wit sonnets =] heheh but i knew tht since i invaded ur w.w folder last yr...SSHH lmao

carenb123 said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 7:10 pm
This poem is really amazing!! :)))

on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:53 pm
i luv this poem !! good job.[= its rlly good :)

on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:15 pm
Fernando this is really great, keep it up(:

steph said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:35 pm
its really good just spelling <3 good job though

cutiiebby said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:31 pm
i didnt now u wrote poems. but this is really good. (:

WhaooSaraXD said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:14 pm
Fernando, congrats, this is an amazing poem. I feel this way sometimes. thanks for these words of wisdom

xenaa14 said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:14 pm
this was so good (:

lisadan28 said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 5:10 pm
Wow fernando.. this has to be one of the best poems i have ever read. I really love it

lexieebabii said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 4:59 pm
this is really good (:

Scila said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 2:25 pm
i like this poem it was good.

on Jan. 25 2010 at 2:18 pm
:O this was amazing its nice great job fernando! :]

on Jan. 25 2010 at 1:59 pm
daking666 SILVER, Union City, New Jersey
8 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
its not the years in your life, but the life in your years because life is like a coin you can spend it any way u want, but you can only spend it once.

truly an amazing set of words ;)

on Jan. 25 2010 at 1:35 pm
daking666 SILVER, Union City, New Jersey
8 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
its not the years in your life, but the life in your years because life is like a coin you can spend it any way u want, but you can only spend it once.

I Love you too Desiree :)

kay15 said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 1:30 pm
This sonnet is wonderful. One of the best you've written Fernando :)

on Jan. 25 2010 at 1:20 pm
i love this fernadooo ! :]




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