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This feeling of betrayal and loneliness
Now the people I trusted are no more
Just leaving me there feeling hopeless
Destroyed me and just walked out the door

Pinned to the wall sword through the heart
Forced to watch everyone as they walk by
Some see me and just aim and through the dart
No one helps me live, only help me dye

I’ll fine one to put a smile on my face
To open the door and take out the sword
Someone who can help me find my own place
Tied together by invisible cord

Forever to live under the same sky
Never to lose you, even when I dye





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SabriHun said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 8:13 pm
aww love the poem...get it fernando u got sum skillz wit sonnets =] heheh but i knew tht since i invaded ur w.w folder last yr...SSHH lmao
 
daking666 replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 8:18 pm
lol damn for real lol well i saw a lot of plz lol :) n thax :D
 
carenb123 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 7:10 pm
This poem is really amazing!! :)))
 
cgiggleskarolina said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 6:53 pm
i luv this poem !! good job.[= its rlly good :)
 
moooitsalicia said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 6:15 pm
Fernando this is really great, keep it up(:
 
steph said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:35 pm
its really good just spelling <3 good job though
 
cutiiebby said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:31 pm
i didnt now u wrote poems. but this is really good. (:
 
WhaooSaraXD said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:14 pm
Fernando, congrats, this is an amazing poem. I feel this way sometimes. thanks for these words of wisdom
 
xenaa14 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:14 pm
this was so good (:
 
lisadan28 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:10 pm
Wow fernando.. this has to be one of the best poems i have ever read. I really love it
 
lexieebabii said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 4:59 pm
this is really good (:
 
Scila said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 2:25 pm
i like this poem it was good.
 
whitegirl10618 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 2:18 pm
:O this was amazing its nice great job fernando! :]
 
daking666 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 1:59 pm
truly an amazing set of words ;)
 
kay15 said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 1:30 pm
This sonnet is wonderful. One of the best you've written Fernando :)
 
randomchickk xp said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 1:20 pm
i love this fernadooo ! :]
 
daking666 replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 1:35 pm
I Love you too Desiree :)
 
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