December 8, 2009
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If I climbed the highest mountain,
Swam across the widest sea,
Possibly would you then,
Begin to believe in me?

If I found the cure to cancer,
Or created a great invention,
Finally would you have faith,
In all my good intentions?

If I stopped the hungry from starving,
And gave strength to all the weak,
Maybe then would you listen,
To all the words I speak?

If you simply made a difference,
In one life or two,
I promise I would be proud,
Because I already believe in you...

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_Elsy_ said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 9:12 am
i loved it, it almost seemed like lyrics when i first read it. And i agree with your poem, yoiu just have to believe someimes. You have a lot of talent. btw-can you check out some of my stuff?
bluemagnet22 replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 4:31 pm
Thanx n ya i'll check out ur stuff
LastChapter said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 8:45 pm
i loved it! but i especially love how your poems rhyme (although they don't have to in order to be good) without the rhymes seeming forced. Lots of times that happens because people try and stay with a rhyming pattern, but it ends up destroying their piece. keep it up!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 9:21 pm
Thank you so much:)
Eli15 said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 5:39 am
Hey this is really good, i would love it if you could write some more like this and your others. they mean alot to me. thankyou. Could you now please view my articles. People has seen it but have not commented on it. I need some feedback so i know what im doing is good or bad
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 9:21 pm
Thank you. I will def check out your work n comment on it:)
xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 11:00 pm
this is amazing, i loved it! i believe in you as a fantastic writer :D check out my work if you want
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 9:18 pm
thank you! I will totally check out your work!
Blossom_astro said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 12:53 am
Your super good at writing don't ever stop.
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 9:17 pm
Aw thank so much...I don't ever plan to stop lol
PoetryLovesMe said...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 8:55 pm
this is really good, you are really talented plz keep writing lol!:] and i have faith in you too!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 23, 2010 at 11:04 am
Awe thank you:)
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 2:10 pm

This is soooo inspirational ! Your amazing at writing ! I love all your pieces ! Don't ever stop writing , your fantastic !

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:34 am
Thank you so much:) 
CassieSherman14 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 30, 2010 at 8:23 pm
Amazing! I believe in you! Great job! Don't let anyone tell you you can't do anything because you most certainly can! I feel like people don't care about me or can hear me sometimes too. The world isn't always a nice place to be, but always smile!
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 11:14 am
Thank you:) well I believe in you too!
CassieSherman14 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 9:21 pm
You're welcome and thank you!
Shells said...
May 21, 2010 at 5:36 pm
I LOVED this poem.  I totally get it.  AMAZING!
bluemagnet22 replied...
May 26, 2010 at 11:09 am
Thank u thank u thank u:):);)
Snookums said...
May 21, 2010 at 2:22 pm

i really didnt like this one either.

i understand that you want people to beilve in you but no one wants to.

Yours Truly,


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