Outdoors Senses

November 21, 2009
By <3Jo<3 SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
<3Jo<3 SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Did you hear that?
The wind through the trees
Love the grass like a mat
And the humming of the bees

Loving the great outdoors
Taking in all the fresh air
Watch that eagle soar
Living freely without care

Feel the soft gentle breeze
Going through grass and sand
While you sit under a big tree
And look out at God’s land



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Milo! said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 7:41 am

Wow. It’s impossible not to be in love with this. It’s truly amazing. It really captures the emotion you’re trying to convey. Keep writing, because I want to see more. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

 


on Dec. 18 2009 at 9:39 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow!! :) i love it! i could picture everything you were writing about. very descriptive and the rhythm of the poem is great :) kudos! check out some of my work and comment, id love your opinion! keep writing, i like your work :)

Haylie SILVER said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 10:47 am
Haylie SILVER, Minneola, Florida
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AWESOME Jo!!


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