Denied Love

November 19, 2009
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What happened to our love?
You make me feel so confused
I thought we were stronger than the stars above
But when I opened up my hand, you refused
Did you have to throw me down?
For you broke my heart in two
Forming my lips into a frown
I don’t know what more I could do
Will we ever be together?
My love is bigger than an ocean
For you our love is a microscopic feather
It’ll take a love potion
But I will wait for you my dear
Waiting for the day I no longer shed a tear

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Emokittiycut This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 4:24 pm
wow.. ur poem really spoke to me cause im smack dab in the middle of it. ur a very talented poet. u cud really go far with it. check out a few of mine and let me know wat yah think. love it!! much appriciated.
Shea_N. replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 1:14 am
thanks!!! that means a lot! i read some of yours and they were really good too.
Arpanan said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 6:44 pm
Haha! Love this one! Told you u would be famous!!!
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