Broken Heart's Allusion

November 7, 2009
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Feeling the intensity eating within me.
Like a bittersweet chemical reaction.
And i dont know what ill soon be.
With all of this painful attraction.
The thoughts of you are numbing my mind.
And my love is stabbing me in the heart.
Im trapt within a deadly bind.
And i fear, that we will never part.
But inside i breifly smile.
For you are somehow still in my life.
But soon, each bad thought i soon redile.
Once again, beggining the strife.
So, all i feel is a deep and painful confusion.
From deep within my broken hearts allusion.

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dreamer_believer said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 5:29 pm
omigoodness!! wow, this is a breathtaking piece. the rhythm and flow of the poem is great. the rhyming is perfect. and i LOVE the last couple lines. this is a great poem, i really like it. 5 stars all the way...BRAVO! could you check out some of my work, id really love your opinion. keep writing-you have talent! :)
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