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Summer

October 23, 2009
By sherina SILVER, New City, New York
sherina SILVER, New City, New York
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The sun comes out to make it a great day
There goes the bird that soars into the sky
The sun’s so bright I hope it’s here to stay
The birds came to the tree to build their nests
I saw the clouds moving; the flowers ope
To feel the sun the doors opened for me
The dolphins jump excitedly and hope
To see me when I stand up on the sea
So suddenly, there goes the sun; it’s gone
It end the day so quickly; I am sad
And that’s how I saw gloaming time has come
It takes away my friends for that I’m mad
I end my day, adieu under the sea
This day has meant all in the world to me



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on Nov. 10 2009 at 11:47 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Ur welcome;)

N thanx:)

sherina SILVER said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 12:04 pm
sherina SILVER, New City, New York
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THANK YOU!!!

AND I WILL TAKE A LOOK AT YOUR POEM

on Nov. 5 2009 at 2:36 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Vry nice poem:) u should check out some of mine;)