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Just one more moment,
Here with you.
Just one last hug,
To get me through.
Just one more moment,
In your sight.
Just one last time,
Kiss me good night.





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phlogiston This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 2:28 pm
I so know how you feel. Great!
 
Avalon,Liv said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:30 pm
short but great:)
 
alliegeoca said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 11:25 am
how is ths a sonnet?
 
costello80 said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 8:42 pm
i really liked this poem, great work
 
AVERAGE said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 2:01 pm
I REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS <3. . . .EXTREMLY GOOD =) KEEP WRITING =)
 
Nicole1210 said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 3:08 pm
I enjoyed reading this!! It was well-written and cute!
 
Duckie430 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 30, 2010 at 8:45 pm
I love this! It's very relatable & honest...amazing.
 
dreamer_believer said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 9:45 am
i've already read this poem like 100 times :) but i had to read it again!! it's one of my VERY favorites. so sweet and honest and pure :) gosh, i love it!!
 
Allyssaisahippie. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 12:25 pm
I love it; it says so much and yes, i agree with you. that one last kiss can get you through almost anything.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 12:39 pm
Thank u:))
 
Joyful_angel said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 8:05 pm
short, but a very meaningful poem!!! i love it, and realte 2 it!!!!
 
Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 9:41 pm
this is exactly how i feel with a certain someone that is in my life...i love it <3 :]
 
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 5:44 pm
i really like it. it had a lot of powerful meaning for such a short poem :) great job!
 
Alexx627 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:40 pm
It's short but it says a whole lot...what can I say...WOW! You're vry talented
 
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