One Last

October 20, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


Just one more moment,
Here with you.
Just one last hug,
To get me through.
Just one more moment,
In your sight.
Just one last time,
Kiss me good night.


The author's comments:
Sometimes that "one last" can get you through a lifetime...I know it sure got me through a whole lot

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on Jul. 11 2012 at 2:28 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

I so know how you feel. Great!

on Dec. 4 2011 at 2:30 pm
Avalon,Liv GOLD, Nelson, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Loved you once love you still always have always will.~ Theres always a little truth behind every "just kidding" a little knowledge behind every " i don't know"~ a little emotion behind every " i don"t care"~ And a little pain behind every "I'm Okay".

short but great:)

on Jun. 11 2011 at 11:25 am
alliegeoca SILVER, Penfield, New York
8 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no such thing as love. It's a fantasy. That's why everyone tries so hard to find it."
~(500) Days of Summer

how is ths a sonnet?

costello80 said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 8:42 pm
costello80, Medford, Massachusetts
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i really liked this poem, great work

AVERAGE said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 2:01 pm
I REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS <3. . . .EXTREMLY GOOD =) KEEP WRITING =)

Lilium BRONZE said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 3:08 pm
Lilium BRONZE, Marysville, Washington
1 article 12 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you don't try, you'll never know.

There is hope, you just have to search your heart for it.

I enjoyed reading this!! It was well-written and cute!

Duckie430 said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 8:45 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

I love this! It's very relatable & honest...amazing.

on Apr. 9 2010 at 9:45 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i've already read this poem like 100 times :) but i had to read it again!! it's one of my VERY favorites. so sweet and honest and pure :) gosh, i love it!!

on Dec. 8 2009 at 12:39 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:))

on Dec. 7 2009 at 12:25 pm
Atlantis PLATINUM, Naylor, Georgia
32 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because we are all looking for the complete definition of love (Beau Sia)

I love it; it says so much and yes, i agree with you. that one last kiss can get you through almost anything.

on Dec. 4 2009 at 8:05 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

short, but a very meaningful poem!!! i love it, and realte 2 it!!!!

on Oct. 28 2009 at 9:41 pm
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have them, flaunt them" -Circle of Friends

"may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past" -irish blessing

If male homosexuals are called "gay," then female homosexuals should be called "ecstatic."

this is exactly how i feel with a certain someone that is in my life...i love it <3 :]

on Oct. 28 2009 at 5:44 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i really like it. it had a lot of powerful meaning for such a short poem :) great job!

Alexx627 said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:40 pm
Alexx627, Moline, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you do what you did then you'll get what you got

It's short but it says a whole lot...what can I say...WOW! You're vry talented


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