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Just one more moment,
Here with you.
Just one last hug,
To get me through.
Just one more moment,
In your sight.
Just one last time,
Kiss me good night.



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Avalon,LivThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 4, 2011 at 2:30 pm:
short but great:)
 
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alliegeoca said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 11:25 am:
how is ths a sonnet?
 
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costello80 said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 8:42 pm:
i really liked this poem, great work
 
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AVERAGE said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 2:01 pm:
I REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS <3. . . .EXTREMLY GOOD =) KEEP WRITING =)
 
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Nicole1210 said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 3:08 pm:
I enjoyed reading this!! It was well-written and cute!
 
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Duckie430This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 30, 2010 at 8:45 pm:
I love this! It's very relatable & honest...amazing.
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 9:45 am:
i've already read this poem like 100 times :) but i had to read it again!! it's one of my VERY favorites. so sweet and honest and pure :) gosh, i love it!!
 
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Allyssaisahippie.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 12:25 pm:
I love it; it says so much and yes, i agree with you. that one last kiss can get you through almost anything.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 12:39 pm :
Thank u:))
 
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Joyful_angel said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 8:05 pm:
short, but a very meaningful poem!!! i love it, and realte 2 it!!!!
 
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Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 9:41 pm:
this is exactly how i feel with a certain someone that is in my life...i love it <3 :]
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 5:44 pm:
i really like it. it had a lot of powerful meaning for such a short poem :) great job!
 
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Alexx627 said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:40 pm:
It's short but it says a whole lot...what can I say...WOW! You're vry talented
 
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