A Gift

October 20, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I got a gift,
It was a new start.
A clean slate,
That cleansed my heart.
It wasn't in the best paper,
But it was filled with love.
The gift was what I needed,
Sent from the Saviour above.


The author's comments:
God's great plain and simple

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on Jul. 9 2011 at 11:50 pm
polyprincess16 SILVER, Tracy, California
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Favorite Quote:
No one can make you feel inferior without your consent. ~Eleanor Roosevelt

Simple but powerful...I love it!

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:39 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you so much:)

on Jun. 3 2010 at 3:54 pm
lifefakeswriting1234 BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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in the words of John Lennon, "The more I see the less I know for sure."

that was great. pure and clean. short and sweet. it sends an amazing feeling down the spine. good luck in all you do. you got talent(:

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:26 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u! :):)

on Mar. 5 2010 at 8:53 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

that was so cute.. i enjoyed it. keep writting. comment some of my poems plz.

on Jan. 2 2010 at 11:17 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I have poems much better than this one...you should check em out n comment on them:) im sry that u didnt like this one so much lol i promise my others are better:)

Patricio said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 3:11 pm
I suppose it is not a bad poem. Keep trying.

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:35 pm
unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
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Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

i like this....short and sweet but yet so much said


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