A Gift

October 20, 2009
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I got a gift,
It was a new start.
A clean slate,
That cleansed my heart.
It wasn't in the best paper,
But it was filled with love.
The gift was what I needed,
Sent from the Saviour above.





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polyprincess16 said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 11:50 pm
Simple but powerful...I love it!
 
lifefakeswriting1234 said...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 3:54 pm
that was great. pure and clean. short and sweet. it sends an amazing feeling down the spine. good luck in all you do. you got talent(:
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 21, 2010 at 11:39 am
Thank you so much:)
 
GreenLover said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:53 pm
that was so cute.. i enjoyed it. keep writting. comment some of my poems plz.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:26 pm
Thank u! :):)
 
Patricio said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 3:11 pm
I suppose it is not a bad poem. Keep trying.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 11:17 am
I have poems much better than this one...you should check em out n comment on them:) im sry that u didnt like this one so much lol i promise my others are better:)
 
unbreakable said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:35 pm
i like this....short and sweet but yet so much said
 
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