Dysfunctional

October 12, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


We were so wrong,
That we made it right.
We slept through the day,
And only talked at night.
We never told the truth,
We only lied.
We always laughed,
When we should have cried.
We were never bland,
We had to add spice.
We were always naughty,
But rarely nice.
We used the words hate,
Instead of using love.
We fell into a ditch,
Instead of rising above.


The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by a previous relationship... can you see why it didn't work out?!?

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on May. 11 2010 at 3:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thanx:) :D

on May. 11 2010 at 3:06 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank U:):)

Miseltoe GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 5:35 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

Nice... I like how your poem can apply to many types of relationships not just a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship. Its refreshing

LuckyThree said...
on May. 3 2010 at 8:27 am
LuckyThree, Ft.Lauderdale, Florida
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pretty simple, but solid.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:07 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

i love the way it ryhmes. and i could see why i didnt work out. nice job keep writting. would you mind taking a look at my poem called my child, my son. i really appreciate the feedback

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:18 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Yay I'm glad:) Thank u I appreciate your comment:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:18 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx lol I love this poem too:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:17 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:) I do love rhyming!

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:17 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:) I will keep writtin I have many more poems on here u should check em out some time;)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:16 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thankz...haha lol tell good luck for me

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:16 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx...ya even though it was a crazy relationship at least I got a pretty good poem out of it lol

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:15 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thank you:)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:14 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you! Ya it's quite obvious lol but atleast I got a good poem out of it lol

Sweet2bme2 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:09 pm
Sweet2bme2, Saugus, Massachusetts
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this was really good. it had a nice rhyme scheme and i understood exactly what it was saying

xlindseyx166 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:00 pm
xlindseyx166, Saugus, Massachusetts
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i love this! i know exactly what you mean by this! keep writing you're so good! (:

Kdominick11 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:57 am
Kdominick11, Saugus, Massachusetts
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i like the rhyme scheme in yourr poem

Scrappydu said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:45 am
Scrappydu, Saugus, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Trolls exist! They eat your socks, but only the left ones."

Love the poem, keep writing more!

on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:03 am
Farah.123 BRONZE, Bamberg, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sticks and stones may break my bones, BUT WORDS WILL SHATHER THE SOUL.

Its great, reminds me of some of my friends, (>_<)!

xxCMMx16 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:01 am
xxCMMx16, Saugus, Massachusetts
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nice poem i liked how you used something you went threw to create the emotion that you did.

ryne8 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:53 am
ryne8, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
yeroo

i like this poem. good jod


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