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wore some high heels.
black and white.
thought i was happy, satisfied you know?
but the haters are like dogs,
they bark- like fish,
they bite.

wore a mini dress.
thought i was happy
turned out to be stressed.
how on earth did i get into this mess?!

got a new "due"
lady like.
started using manners
saying please, and bless you!

thought i was happy
but it turnes out i was shocked.
i thought i had my ex boyfriends on lock!
so why did one pop up and bring me to shock?

i thought i was happy!
oh God what went wrong?
i'm tired of singing this same hateful song!
drastic, painful, and bad for the heart.
i knew trouble would come from the start.

why do i feed into this mess-
kiddy-ness?
i pray to God this will stop,
the world may be over.
christians don't flop!
i failed the test my grade just droped.
my faith isn't enough.

so what now?

i thought i was happy....



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mee-mee said...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 10:15 am:
thank you so much !
 
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mee-mee said...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 10:14 am:
thank you so much !
 
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KiaraRiki said...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 11:24 pm:
wow this poem reminda me of me i like it i know how you feel
 
mee-mee replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 10:16 am :
thank you so much !
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 3:04 pm:
Vry unique;) you should check out some of my poems:)
 
mee-mee replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 10:16 am :
awee thanks(: andd okaay i will !!
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 8:32 pm:
great poem! :) very clever. BRAVO :)
 
mee-mee replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 10:16 am :
thank you(:
 
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