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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

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unicorns97 said...
May 5, 2015 at 9:12 am
I have felt this do many times. This is an amazing!
Zeeshan said...
May 1, 2015 at 11:25 am
I can surely relate. Its pretty sad. Amazing peice of work!
NoNamer0102 said...
Apr. 27, 2015 at 4:54 pm
That was nice
. said...
Mar. 4, 2015 at 9:35 am
How pretty!
lucyyyyy217462873 said...
Mar. 2, 2015 at 5:16 am
this isn't a sonnet
Gabbyobelar said...
Feb. 26, 2015 at 1:13 pm
This is my life.
alejandra e.❤ said...
Feb. 19, 2015 at 9:07 pm
I totally related to this sadly .
RealRiter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 18, 2015 at 3:20 pm
Nice! This is such a good poem!
GGauns said...
Feb. 2, 2015 at 11:36 am
Describes exactly how I feel. Really good. Can you read mine and comment??
AustinR said...
Jan. 22, 2015 at 10:57 am
Gorgeous, simply so well written. The sadness from this experience seeps through the words. Any of use who can relate immediately fell in love with this piece. Again, an amazing piece.
nelehjr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 17, 2015 at 12:25 am
Beautiful. So sad though...
wilds said...
Jan. 7, 2015 at 8:00 am
kennedyshine This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2015 at 2:08 am
I'm confused why this isn't in the magazine
DLove said...
Dec. 31, 2014 at 11:26 am
This is a very inspirational sonnet, not hard at all to relate to
Paakhi said...
Dec. 24, 2014 at 6:54 am
It's beautiful :) I love this poem
_xxmuxicismydrugxx_ said...
Dec. 11, 2014 at 6:30 pm
Your sonnet was very good. Im getting some inspriataion from it as well. I had the same thing happen to me. I met up with my best-friend and she wasnt the same. She walked different, talked differnt but the thing I noticed the most was her additude. She treated me like I was her butler and I didnt like it. The girl I used to know, was gone.
BlackNek0This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 17, 2014 at 10:42 am
I like your sonnet its verry now. Many peots have started leaving the iambic pentamete and the rules. if you searched online you would find many famous poets not fallowing poetic rules one inculding shakespear himself. Your poem had feeling that is all that matters.
cheymars227 said...
Nov. 4, 2014 at 1:56 pm
Please stop being so picky about HOW she wrote it, just notice she got her story out and that it is beautiful. We shouldn't have to follow someone else's rules just to write a nice piece. Let her be, please. From a fellow "poet" one that doesn't follow so called laws of poetry
Caramel_Shades said...
Aug. 18, 2014 at 12:48 pm
honestly i don''t care about the structure the MESSAGE is amazingly and horrifyingly true. you'vejust inspired me to write about my brother his story is similar to yhour friend's look for it soon "Brother"
Westiera said...
Jun. 19, 2014 at 6:21 pm
An elizabethan sonnet actually contains 14 lines with 3 quatrains and one couplet each line must have 10 syllables making it have an iambic pentameter
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