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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.



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booboo360 said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 11:23 am
Okay so I submitted my poem it is called summer girl. Hope u like it.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:23 pm
SWEET!
I can't wait to read it!
 
zack1069 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 11:30 pm
i like it its really simple but good
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:23 pm
Thanx;) all of my poems r pretty simple but that have a lot of meaning and emotion behind them:)
 
TylerCruz said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 8:45 am
this is actually pretty good
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:22 pm
Well actually thanx:)
lol
 
Katiebrox3 said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 10:40 pm
I really like this, it describes me and my old friend right now. Keep writing, your really good. <3
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:22 pm
Thank u so much:)
n i'm sry about ur friend
i hope only the best for the future!
 
Griffin said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 8:31 pm
this is really good and i really like it. i think everyone can relate
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:21 pm
Thank u:)
I rly try to make my poems as relatable as possible
 
Raychell D. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 1:48 pm
very sweet & sad. we can all relate to the changes and goodbyes that happen over summertime. <3
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:21 pm
thank you:)
Oh yes the heart breaks of summer
 
Larissa S. said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 8:01 am
when i read your poem i imediately assumed it was about an ex boy friend or old crush untill i read your quote about it and relized it was about old friends who changed ... i thought your poem was amazing and like how it can really relate to either ... great job ... keep writingg !!!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:20 pm
Thank you so much!
That is my favorite thing about this poem is that i can relate to many different situations and I didn't even mean to do that when I first wrote it but I guess that's just the magic of poetry!
 
respecturself7 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 4:56 pm
I love this poem! You have talent!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:18 pm
Thank u so much:)
I'm sure u have great talent too!
 
GreenLover said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 8:23 pm
hey that was. i really felt what you were talking about. would you mind taking a look at some of my work?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:17 pm
I'm glad:)
Yeppers I'll def take a look:)
 
Johaa said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 4:35 pm
Really good! I loved it.
I know exactly what you mean.
this has happened to me more than once!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 12:16 pm
Thanx:)
Ya sadly it happens too often...
 
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