You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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vnprice BRONZE said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:33 am
vnprice BRONZE, Abita Springs, Louisiana
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I feel like I should tell you, I love you!

on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:59 am
Nicholas Hutchins BRONZE, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I really liked this poem! I favored it and showed some of my friends it and they liked it as well.

on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:51 am
annalisewarnock, Saugus, Massachusetts
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This poem was great and im sure alot of people can relate to it. I realllllyy liked it

nancy19 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:50 am
nancy19, Saugus, Massachusetts
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it gives very good descriptions and i can imagine the person you are talking about.

on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:49 am
alessaxoxo BRONZE, Saugus, Massachusetts
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This was very well written. i feel like it has very strong meaning to it and when i read it i can realate to how you are feeling :) <3

xlindseyx166 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:41 am
xlindseyx166, Saugus, Massachusetts
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this poems so cute! i love it, good description!

Victoriaaa14 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:06 am
Victoriaaa14, Saugus, Massachusetts
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good poem, very discriptive. the similies were good. and it was very meaningful and truee. Good job :)

derickaa said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:03 am
derickaa, Everett, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Yeaaa Ehh . & Well you knw ;

very discriptive , usage of alliteraton nd similies were on point . keep up the good work (;

asdfgh said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:59 am
asdfgh, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Yes It Was(:

asdfgh said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:59 am
asdfgh, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Aww I Like This, Its Easy To Understand And Most People Can Relate To This(:

xo0amanda17 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:53 am
xo0amanda17, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
yaaaaaaaaaaah!

this is a great poem ... it makes alot of sence on how people change so quickly and easily.

geeebabyy22 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:52 am
geeebabyy22, Saugus, Massachusetts
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i really liked this poem. it really shows how people really are. great job!!!!

karinaaaxo0 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:48 am
karinaaaxo0, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I love this poem. It's very descriptive.

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:56 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I just wanted to take the moment to Thank EVERYONE who has ever left a comment:) I truly appreciate every single note...whether it is a compliment or constructive critism I appreciate it all. I not only write for me but also for you all...I want my poetry to touch lives and knowing that I've touched some of yours means a lot to me and really encourages my to keep writing. So THANK YOU ALL again! and everyone keep writing!

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:51 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe thank u:) that's sweet!

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:50 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx:)

it's not it's the first poem i submitted on here n i didn't kno where to put it lol much like the rest of my poems lol ooops! but does it rly matter what it's classified as...don't the words, rhyme, n flow matter much more?


on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:49 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u I rly appreciate the compliment!

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:47 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u:):)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:46 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank u not only for the compliment but also the comment itself:) It encourages me so much when my poetry touches someone and means something:)

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:45 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank YOU!!!!


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