You & Me

October 8, 2009
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I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.





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karinaaaxo0 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:48 am
I love this poem. It's very descriptive.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:50 am
Thank u so much:)
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:56 pm
I just wanted to take the moment to Thank EVERYONE who has ever left a comment:) I truly appreciate every single note...whether it is a compliment or constructive critism I appreciate it all. I not only write for me but also for you all...I want my poetry to touch lives and knowing that I've touched some of yours means a lot to me and really encourages my to keep writing. So THANK YOU ALL again! and everyone keep writing!
 
Valeria C. said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 1:24 pm

Really good! It makes me want to cry.

 

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:51 pm
Awe thank u:) that's sweet!
 
pg13 said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 3:23 pm
Great poem, but, how is this a sonnet?
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:50 pm

Thanx:)

it's not it's the first poem i submitted on here n i didn't kno where to put it lol much like the rest of my poems lol ooops! but does it rly matter what it's classified as...don't the words, rhyme, n flow matter much more?

 
maddys.shamless said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 6:48 am
Soooo! Wonderful..words can not describe!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:49 pm
Thank u I rly appreciate the compliment!
 
s.nichole. said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 10:54 am
wow.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:47 pm
Thank u:):)
 
Whisperer said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 9:10 pm
I really like this. it explains so much.  i've watched close friends change throughout the years, for better or for worse. and sometimes it's sad to see them turn in a different direction than you. that you SO much for this. it means alot :) keep writing
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:46 pm
Thank u not only for the compliment but also the comment itself:) It encourages me so much when my poetry touches someone and means something:)
 
lnvo97 said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:37 pm
this is amazing!!!
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:45 pm
Thank YOU!!!!
 
berry said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 3:35 pm
hey this is hot keep up the good work
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:45 pm

Well thank u:) 

lol I've never had anyone tell me my poem was hot before so thanx

 
Ghada.Q. said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 12:54 pm

This is sooo sweet. It'd be a great song too!

Do check out my work too if you can :)

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:44 pm
Thank u;) n I'll def check out ur work;);)
 
Metree This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:33 am
wow i love this! I'm trying to get one published called Brick Wall that I submitted about a week and a half ago that hasn't passed through the editors yet that is JUST like this and I know exactly how you must feel because the same thing happened with one of my really close friends and she's totally not the same person anymore
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 2:43 pm

Thanx:)

Well deff let me kno when it goes through cuz I totally wana read it;)

 
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