You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Aug. 12 2016 at 10:45 am
RyeaAlexisYoung GOLD, Christiansburg, Virginia
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I LOVE this!!! Great job!

on Jul. 27 2016 at 10:13 pm
kiwi-dictatorship BRONZE, Centreville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"And in the end, we were all just humans, drunk on the idea that love, only love, could heal our brokenness."

I love this poem!

on Jul. 26 2016 at 8:25 pm
CreepyKarma13 BRONZE, Odessa, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Stand up, brush it off.

Hm. Yea, it is always really sad.

on Jun. 19 2016 at 10:19 am
YoungBeauty GOLD, Claremont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
" Beauty isn't about having pretty face. It's about having a pretty mind, a pretty heart, and a pretty soul"

I love this poem! you put so much heart and soul into it. It make me so emotional as I can relate to this. Keep writing!!

Henrymcc8 said...
on Jun. 9 2016 at 2:05 pm
Henrymcc8,
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I'm glad that I saw thus poem. This is really sad, and it really touches my heart. It was also really powerful. Great poem! Glad I read it!

on Jun. 9 2016 at 1:10 pm
interestingchoiceofwords, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Tie a noose around your mind, loose enough to be fine..." Twenty One Pilots, Holding On To You

Short, but powerful. Sometimes people can give poems unnecessary length, but yours was perfect. On top of that, you mentioned no names, no specific events, and yet you still have about 800 people relating to it!

on Jun. 9 2016 at 5:31 am
Mr.WordExpert BRONZE, Kolhapur, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself. Love yourself. Live yourself.

amazing.. lovey

on Jun. 2 2016 at 2:59 pm
FallenAngel11283 PLATINUM, Cincinnati , Ohio
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Hello, I ran across your writing I'm very glad I found it. It's truly amazing my favorite line is, Your eyes no longer sparkle, You've changed since last September. Your a truly good writer.. Keep up the good work! I will be reading what you publish from now on. Have a wonderful day

on May. 23 2016 at 9:48 am
I love it! Its perfect!

on May. 19 2016 at 12:00 pm
kendal.26 BRONZE, Glenpool, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Today you are you! That is truer than true! There is no one alive who is you-er than you! -Dr. Suess

Being optimistic isn't always being happy. It's taking what the world throws at you and saying "I'm not gonna let this bring me down"!

This is truly amazing!

on May. 19 2016 at 10:52 am
Nated315 DIAMOND, Georgetown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Truth has many shades. It's not a matter of black and white, but many grays.

its a wonDerful pieCe that you've wrItten. I can feel it! emotIon aNd the wORding is so PeRfEcT. tHAnk yOu foR wRiting This!!!!

on May. 17 2016 at 4:08 pm
cheetahsdontroar SILVER, North Haledon, New Jersey
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Wow. That was beautiful. You have true talent. Not many people can create sonnets that flow so naturally.

on May. 4 2016 at 11:02 am
Skatergirl152 BRONZE, New Kent, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
The happiest people don't always have the best of of everything, they just make the best of everything!!

so beautiful

on May. 4 2016 at 9:32 am
CoverFireStyx,
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Hey, im the changed one.

dpurdy said...
on May. 3 2016 at 12:19 pm
dpurdy, Craryville Ny, New York
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Favorite Quote:
always love yourself no matter what.

amazing poem

on Apr. 26 2016 at 9:51 am
WhYsOsErIoUsSs GOLD, Marshalltown, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Live everyday like it's your last"

Absolutely heart touching :)

on Apr. 26 2016 at 8:02 am
Rogateeeeer BRONZE, Columbus, New Jersey
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interesting

on Apr. 26 2016 at 7:55 am
FrootLoops BRONZE, Columbus, New Jersey
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Wow! Great poem! It's very deep-down and I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this poem in some way.

Tkenns BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2016 at 8:46 pm
Tkenns BRONZE, Des Moines, Iowa
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I was wondering if this poem was based off of one of your true experiences If anyone has time to check my work out I do mostly short free verse poems. I'll post a link in case anyone wants to check it out!

lizferguson said...
on Apr. 21 2016 at 1:38 pm
lizferguson, Lafayette, New York
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Lovely work.




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