Where Am I? MAG

October 2, 2009
By theFool BRONZE, Whitby, Other
theFool BRONZE, Whitby, Other
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Where am I? Enchanting Ariel's seas,
Ingesting delish treats with Fairy Queen,
With hungry Winnie chasing after bees,
Or dancing deep in distant forest green?

Shhh, are those the seven Dwarfs I hear,
Or Snow White singing bliss in peaceful song?
The magic mirror brings cold dangers near;
The witch and poisoned apple move along.

Vengeance, hatred, spite, and plot,
Under joy and friendship, are sinking,
Against such ardent love the cruel wins not,
And my world concludes in happy ending.

To Grimm and Andersen I lift the veils;
I yearn for words and live in fairy tales.



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on Feb. 12 2015 at 12:00 pm
TheBibliophile GOLD, La Canada, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I would challenge you to a battle of wits, but I see that you are unarmed"- William Shakespeare

This is lovely, it really appeals to the wistful and whimsical side of me!

on Jan. 28 2013 at 7:50 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Beautiful... A poem that reminds that this is something I yearn for too...

on Feb. 27 2012 at 3:57 pm
rebecca-rose GOLD, Shrewsbury, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
“Every thorn is just part of the stem to a beautiful rose” - R.R.

I am so in love with this sonnet. Definitely the best I've read so far. The flow was very good and the rhyme scheme was well carried out and didn't feel forced. It's very good! 

on Apr. 11 2011 at 2:53 pm
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

I LOVE THIS! :D You took me straight back to the good old days when the world was innocent and kind! My favorite poem on this sight! Very well done!

Trio123 GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 1:05 pm
Trio123 GOLD, Sunnyvale, California
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I adore this poem! My childhood, summed up.

Nora Holihan said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 12:42 am
Nora Holihan, Altamonte Springs, Florida
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such a good poem. personally love it to death

on Jan. 7 2011 at 12:16 am
Aredhel PLATINUM, Lynnwood, Washington
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I love this poem. It has beautiful rhythm and I can completely relate.

Abwell BRONZE said...
on Nov. 30 2010 at 6:42 pm
Abwell BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
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Wow that is really good!

Duckie430 said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 12:01 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

this is such a good poem...

on Jun. 28 2010 at 9:19 am
sesquipedalia SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nowhere's now here smelling of junipers.

Truly, this is one amazing piece. So much so that I now make my first comment on TeenInk in honour of it! 

The fluidity captured me in this tight composition. :)


on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:38 pm
ramnapotter PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Write to be understood, speak to be heard, read to grow...”

Ahah , great job ! You did wonderfully on this sonnet . Your message truly shone through , and all that stuff . But more than anything , it was beautifully composed and showed who you are as a poet . Kudos to you for writing this , and writing it so well ! (:

on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:37 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

This really is adorable - I love all of it, and you get huge extra points because of all these things we treasured as kids. I want to run with pooh and eat too much honey, sing with the dwarfs, and laugh with the funny, fall in love with the prince and sail off to happily ever after in a hurry. :)

justbe-3 said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 5:12 pm
justbe-3, Hollis, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"You live but once, you might as well be amusing." -Coco Chanel
"Here is the test to find whether your mission on Earth is finished: if you're alive, it isn't." -Richard Bach
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love." -Einstein

this is adorable.

TheAzn said...
on Oct. 19 2009 at 9:04 pm
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUl!

on Oct. 14 2009 at 10:09 pm
Lixxy_93 DIAMOND, Westminster, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you have them, flaunt them" -Circle of Friends

"may the saddest day of the future be no worse then the happiest day of your past" -irish blessing

If male homosexuals are called "gay," then female homosexuals should be called "ecstatic."

I love this one, I have grown up surrounded by disney its great to hear other people still like fairy tales too


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