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Where am I? Enchanting Ariel's seas,
Ingesting delish treats with Fairy Queen,
With hungry Winnie chasing after bees,
Or dancing deep in distant forest green?

Shhh, are those the seven Dwarfs I hear,
Or Snow White singing bliss in peaceful song?
The magic mirror brings cold dangers near;
The witch and poisoned apple move along.

Vengeance, hatred, spite, and plot,
Under joy and friendship, are sinking,
Against such ardent love the cruel wins not,
And my world concludes in happy ending.

To Grimm and Andersen I lift the veils;
I yearn for words and live in fairy tales.

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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 7:50 am:
Beautiful... A poem that reminds that this is something I yearn for too...
 
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rebecca-rose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 27, 2012 at 3:57 pm:
I am so in love with this sonnet. Definitely the best I've read so far. The flow was very good and the rhyme scheme was well carried out and didn't feel forced. It's very good! 
 
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Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 2:53 pm:
I LOVE THIS! :D You took me straight back to the good old days when the world was innocent and kind! My favorite poem on this sight! Very well done!
 
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dreamxentertain This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 1:05 pm:
I adore this poem! My childhood, summed up.
 
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Nora H. said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 12:42 am:
such a good poem. personally love it to death
 
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Aredhel said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 12:16 am:
I love this poem. It has beautiful rhythm and I can completely relate.
 
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Abwell said...
Nov. 30, 2010 at 6:42 pm:
Wow that is really good!
 
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Duckie430 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 22, 2010 at 12:01 pm:
this is such a good poem...
 
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quixoticzephyr said...
Jun. 28, 2010 at 9:19 am:

Truly, this is one amazing piece. So much so that I now make my first comment on TeenInk in honour of it! 

The fluidity captured me in this tight composition. :)

 
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--ramrams said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 3:38 pm:
Ahah , great job ! You did wonderfully on this sonnet . Your message truly shone through , and all that stuff . But more than anything , it was beautifully composed and showed who you are as a poet . Kudos to you for writing this , and writing it so well ! (:
 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:37 am:
This really is adorable - I love all of it, and you get huge extra points because of all these things we treasured as kids. I want to run with pooh and eat too much honey, sing with the dwarfs, and laugh with the funny, fall in love with the prince and sail off to happily ever after in a hurry. :)
 
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justbe-3 said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 5:12 pm:
this is adorable.
 
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TheAzn said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 9:04 pm:
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUl!
 
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Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 10:09 pm:
I love this one, I have grown up surrounded by disney its great to hear other people still like fairy tales too
 
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