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I’m feeling like I’m wishing
Like a part of me is breaking
like a change is quickly coming
like my hands will not stop shaking

I’m feeling like its hard
And its not worth all this pain
I’m feeling like I need to cry
I wish that it would rain.

I can’t say what I’m feeling
I’m not quite sure what’s wrong
I need to start the healing
Play this sweet sad song



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lemonygirl97 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:10 pm:
I think it has a beautiful ring to it. The passion and deepness carriend on in this poem moves me.
 
steff123456789 replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 10:39 am :
IT MOVED YOU? to where? yo it didnt move me grrrrrrl
 
lemonygirl97 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 5:49 pm :
It moved my emotions not really no body. It's not physical it's emotional. That is the best way I can explain it.
 
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love&peace123 said...
Jan. 6, 2010 at 4:50 pm:
i loved reading this, i read it a few times actually, i think most everyone can relate to it, it was wonderful
 
peace&love321 replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 10:42 am :
yo grrrrrrl, what it is. dis be steff 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9. dis aint no peace and love, you know.
 
steff123456789 replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 10:42 am :
it aint relatin to me grl you know, it was short
 
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Lixxy_93 said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 10:18 pm:
This poem fits me perfectly right now, its always amazing to see your own feelings come from someone else's words. Wonderful work
 
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 8:02 am :
thank you I'm glad my poetry can realate to someone
 
steff123456789 replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 10:44 am :
YEAH GIRL YOU GETTIN COMPLIMENTS LEFT AND RIGHT GIRL. YOU ARE AN AZMAZIN RIGHTER. YOU IS LIKE NIKOLAS SPARCS. GIRL. YOU ARE GRATE.
 
OriginalCarbonation replied...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 4:21 pm :
i know! this is exacly what i've been going through this last week. this is exactly how they I've been feeling
 
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troubleshot said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 7:56 pm:
I think everyone can relate to this poem in some way. i thought it was very nice to read.
 
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aRunningTourist This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 1:40 am:
I love how you include weather and music. When i got over a tough break up i just wanted everything to be miserable. Including the weather, my music, my art, and my poetry. Definately a fantastic poem.
 
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mee-mee said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 3:45 pm:
i like this. you're right. it does have a little ring to it. you did great.
 
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connellys said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 6:35 pm:
I enjoyed reading this sonnet because I believe that it can relate to almost everyone wo reads it. At one point everyone is confused and does not know what to do, and they wish that they can figure out what to do and solve the problem. This piece also had a great flow to it. The way the words fit together was incredible. When you said "like a change is coming" it shows how someone easily knows that something is going to happen, whether it is good or bad, but they don't know ho... (more »)
 
mee-mee replied...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 3:47 pm :
yeah. ur right. and i guess thats why i like it so much, because i can relate to it. this was a good write hannah keep it up! and good luck to all poets, and writters.
 
steff123456789 replied...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 10:46 am :
writters. writters. writters.
 
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bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 11:48 am:
Nice poem its has a really great flow to it
 
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Laura A. said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 10:11 am:
this is a beautiful poem i love it!!! amazing job :) kudos my friend kudos!
 
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Inkspired said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 5:26 pm:
This is a really nice poem, like you say, it has a nice ring to it, and very well written. Like cross.fire said, I think everyone can relate to it. Well done!
 
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cross.fire said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 4:58 pm:
How many times have I felt this? It's awesome to know I'm not the only one.
 
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