Stuck

September 5, 2009
By hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."


Everyone's stuck
Inside there own mind
feeling these things the same

They think that they're lost
but they never were found
we're all playing similar games


The author's comments:
Lots going on in my life i had to write this

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olala said...
on Nov. 28 2017 at 3:24 pm
olala, Baytown, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
I love me

im not stuck

on Nov. 28 2017 at 7:36 am
TK_Writes BRONZE, Ballston Lake, New York
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Being optimistic is filing in a cross word puzzle with a pen" -Anonymous

Short yet packed with emotion - good job

on Mar. 4 2016 at 1:53 pm
Poetry101 BRONZE, Faith, South Dakota
3 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't need anybody to tell you who you are or what you are. You are what you are !













~John Lennon

I love this poem so much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bug16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 8:34 pm
Bug16 GOLD, Bedford, Texas
16 articles 9 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
If at first you do succeed, try not to look astonished.
~Anonymous

Advice for life: Don't Die

Wow!  In just 26 words you have conveyed a world-wide feeling (for lack of a better word).  I love it.  Keep it up!

on Oct. 24 2010 at 7:34 pm
PrincessPea PLATINUM, Covington, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
IMPOSSIBLE TO KNOCK ME OFF MY ROAD TO SUCCESS

tihs is so true i am in the same situation right now. your poem helps me through it.

on Oct. 4 2010 at 2:03 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

This is so true . I like this .

on Sep. 10 2010 at 6:59 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

This is great and so true.

I love it. :)

 

You're an amazing poet. Keep writing. 


Babylufin GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:55 pm
Babylufin GOLD, Liberal, Missouri
13 articles 2 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"'For I know the plans I have for you', declares the Lord, 'plans to prosper you and not harm you, plans to give you hope and a future.'" Jeremiah 29:11. Thank you Lord, for this future you've given me.

I love this. It's very true. Good job, keep it up! :D

Please take a look at my work if possible? It would mean so much! Comment or Rate? :D


on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:55 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u


on Jun. 14 2010 at 12:12 am
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people.
-Eleanor Roosevelt

I think, at a child's birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

i love this

on May. 1 2010 at 1:15 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

Of course! I was just saying how everyone sort of feels the same thing, but they all think that what they are feeling is special and different. We're stuck in our own minds so we don't see anything else. The bit about "they think that they're lost..." is about how we think we've strayed from a path that we were never on... if that makes sense. We all play games and stuff with our life and the people in it, but we don't see that the people around us do the same thing. We think we're special. I hope this explained it. Check out some more of my work, I'd love to know what you think:]

seapenguin said...
on May. 1 2010 at 3:44 am
seapenguin, Healdsburg, California
0 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a super hero, but with no powers or motivation.

Can you explain it, please? I don't quite understand it... but I'd like to.

on Oct. 3 2009 at 1:10 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

Thank you!! I will comment on some of your work!

on Oct. 3 2009 at 12:07 pm
rueebee21 SILVER, El Paso, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Adapt and overcome" - Coach Massey

this is mah fav.<br />
poem of all the others <br />
i've read from yours <br />
it expresses a lot of emotion

Molls.xo GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:56 pm
Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments
Beautiful. It's simple yet there is so much emotion behind it. It's saddening.




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