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January 10, 2020
By Anonymous

Roses are red,

Violets are blue,

The view is breathtaking,

And so are you.


Orchids are white,

They grow in a pair,

The sun is golden,

And so is your hair.


Sunflowers reach,

Up to the skies,

The ocean is cobalt,

And so are your eyes.


Horses in pastures,

Surround the farms,

A summer night is warm,

And so are your arms.


Daisies are pretty,

Tulips have style,

My message is welcoming,

And so is your smile.



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AceAnne BRONZE said...
on Dec. 31 2020 at 2:29 am
AceAnne BRONZE, Morrison, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Well, my friends praise me and make me look like an idiot, while my enemies tell me straightforwardly that I am an idiot. My enemies help me understand myself better, which is an advantage, and my friends help me lie about myself, which is a disadvantage. So if four negatives make two affirmatives, I’m worse off because of my friends and better off because of my foes." - Shakespeare's Twelfth Night

This is so pretty and sweet, I love it! I also really like how you took something so iconic and made it your own. Also, I'm doing a challenge for the authors of every piece I comment on, I'm calling it the Snowflake challenge (anyone familiar with the snowflake method for writing will know that the snowflake structure never stops connecting). I challenge you too read another writer's piece and leave a kind and genuine comment, ending with you challenging them to do the same ;)