Rage Song (Sorry)

May 4, 2017
By DarkRayne PLATINUM, Garden City, Idaho
DarkRayne PLATINUM, Garden City, Idaho
35 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I swear dude, one day, i'm gonna get off the bus and run into the forest, and i wont come back, and when i do, i'm gonna be the knife master." ~The Rev


She likes to lie to my face,
She mocks my ways,
While she hates my race,
It only takes days,
For me to snap,
And lose it all,
You gave me crap,
Make me feel small,
This is my rage,
You brought it all,
No more green graze,
Need me? In the hospital,
I hate the anger,
And the frustrate,
Fell me like timber,
At any rate,
I’ll give up,
Someday,
I’ll need backup,
Nothing to say,
I am addicted,
To all the hate,
As I predicted,
Used me as bait,
Honey, I’m sorry,
But I must move on,
My visions blurry,
For all this I’ve done,
Unless,
You say you love me,
One day a white dress,
You will see


The author's comments:

this combines my feeling of rage and my feeling of love for a cheating woman.


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on May. 10 2017 at 8:46 pm
DarkRayne PLATINUM, Garden City, Idaho
35 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I swear dude, one day, i'm gonna get off the bus and run into the forest, and i wont come back, and when i do, i'm gonna be the knife master." ~The Rev

i write all the time, thank you @_.briyonam.g._

on May. 9 2017 at 12:55 pm
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
48 articles 3 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?"
"I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me"

This is great! keep on writing!


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