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Hello

Verse 1:
The school bell is ringing again,
the beating of shattered heart,
a thousand tears shed,
and fake smiling from this nightmare.

Chorus:
Has no-one told you I’m not happy?
My soul is dying,
from this disease of torment,
come death.
Hello old friend,
I’m here with my sister Loneliness.
Hello.

Verse 2:
Halls flooded with familiar faces,
laughter and talking
sends me into a deeper pit.

Chorus:
I am in this pit,
I can’t get out.
Hello, please help me
or I’ll fall into nothingness.

Verse 3:
Words shaped as swords,
piercing through me
from the chest to back,
sinister smiles,
yelling,
and opposite taunting,
will this ever stop?

Chorus:
Why do you say
“suck it up?”
Don’t you know
that you are making
the pain only worse?
Hello, I am rejection
to be your guest for a while.

Verse 4:
Familiar blood,
whipping me
without the practice of brain
and having the heartless feeling
of a robot.

Chorus:
Why can’t you live me alone,
I don’t need CPR,
I need a friend to help me live.
Hello depression,
please wipe my tears
for I am nothing at the beginning.
Don’t cry.

Verse 5:
Suddenly a blade goes through my skin,
red blood crawling my skin,
pain exploded in my brain,
hello sweet death,
take me from this abusive world.




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bjfz03-10 said...
today at 1:36 pm
It is so good, even though it is sad. This should be a career, writing songs about real life problems and sharing htem with the world.
 
SpeakerofWolvesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 6:01 pm
@bjfz03-10 Thank you for your kind words. I look forward to your work! :)
 
reach4marsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 25 at 9:03 pm
So glad you're getting into lyric writing cause I love this, so sad though :(
 
SpeakerofWolvesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 26 at 8:05 pm
Thanks! I really wanted to make a song about this.
 
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